All Comments on 'Me, Mom, and Our Fantasies Ch. 03'

one of the best stories read.

Your first chapter was fantastic. A boy trying to seduce his widow mother softly and patiently was well portrayed. But when it came to 2nd and 3rd the boy started acting like a maniac. The story teller had tried to pack in too many fetishes eg: lesbo, public exposing, gang bang, and and of course incest.Those who love incest need not like gang bang and other things. Also when the story moves too far away from reality it becomes a bore. By the end of third chapter it has already become rubbish. I hope it will be taken care of in the next chapters.