by KissedMany
Can't wait for Brad and Ann need to continue their fun. Some Anal in the morning.
Enjoy the 2 sides he said she said parts.
Need some Matt and daughter action. Thanks for writing.
if i had one recommendation, though, it would be to consider the voice you are using... the constant jumping from person to person is a distraction that using the 'god's eye' perspective would eliminate and bring more smooth flow to the story.
RA