All Comments on 'Medical Marijuana and Daughter's Ex Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
great story keep them coming

Can't wait for Brad and Ann need to continue their fun. Some Anal in the morning.

Enjoy the 2 sides he said she said parts.

Need some Matt and daughter action. Thanks for writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
liking the story, keep it coming...

if i had one recommendation, though, it would be to consider the voice you are using... the constant jumping from person to person is a distraction that using the 'god's eye' perspective would eliminate and bring more smooth flow to the story.

RA

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