All Comments on 'Meeting Marie Ch. 01'

Yes, I think Marie could have been perfect if it weren't for her aversion to our 'flat' beer. A pint of real ale would do her the world of good (fizzy beer, ugh!). I laughed at Anna's 'bedtime exercises'...I guess her daily dozen would be very exhausting. This fun little story shows great promise, Anna. But for the sake of all the amateur astronomers among your reading, let's have Saturn 5 quickly (please...). And talking of astronomy, five stars!

I am sure it took a lot of strength to walk out of the bedroom with her laying there naked and so willing to go farther but I am sure it will happen soon

Anna and Marie are wonderful characters, love how different they are. Opposites attract!

Is there a reason the bartender, when asked for an Italian white, suggests a wine made from grapes that they don't use in Italy?

Hi all my lovely readers! Yes, there is a slight mistake, as noted. Chardonnay is not Italian. So, it's either my mistake (which it is!) or the barman's and I just let him get away with it.

I sincerely hope this didn't ruin the story for anybody.

Once again, thank you for all the lovely comments and ratings!

Anna

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I just love the way Anna brings her characters to life. She puts us right there, close up and so very real.

Thanks again, Anna. x

Chardonnay grapes are grown in Italy (Umbria and Lazio for sure, possibly other regions?). My local wine shop carries a dozen different Italian Chardonnays.

Hello anna, yet another great story. Love the characters. I cant wait to read what happens in the next chapters. Please keep writing stories. Hugs

Anna, among your many gifts you have a great flair for narrating the start of relationships, and this is no exception! Loved it and am looking forward to reading how Anna and Marie progress from here.

Marixxxxx

What a lovely beginning. You depict Marie so well, and. I love the way she make’s Anna’s resistance crumble.

You capture the excitement of a new passion perfectly. I love how tentative but consumed she was. I was hoping she wouldn’t have sex yet. It’s delissh

Not quite the tear inducing moments from some of your other writings but I suspect that may change as the story progresses. As ever Anna spellbinding descriptions of everything.

Feels so good!