All Comments on 'Meeting My Master (Complete)'

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SEVERUSMAXSEVERUSMAXover 10 years ago
Awesome story...

...even if I am biased. Great work, dear. Very vivid and personal.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
boring

Doesn't belong in bdsm. Maybe romance but spanking isn't all that bdsm entails. Too much dialogue.

Reads like a badly written romance novella

SEVERUSMAXSEVERUSMAXover 10 years ago
I disagree.

BDSM doesn't always have to be hard-core. This one might be lighter D/s with a more romantic side, but it's still BDSM. Nothing wrong with having dialogue if the author is so inspired, either.

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