by amasterfound
...even if I am biased. Great work, dear. Very vivid and personal.
Doesn't belong in bdsm. Maybe romance but spanking isn't all that bdsm entails. Too much dialogue.
Reads like a badly written romance novella
BDSM doesn't always have to be hard-core. This one might be lighter D/s with a more romantic side, but it's still BDSM. Nothing wrong with having dialogue if the author is so inspired, either.