All Comments on 'Meg's Birthday Present'

You're doing quite well. Please keep writing more about Meg and her subs, you have a solid feeling for the sensations involved and can make them come across to us readers.

The two stories you have so far are amazing! Please continue!

Hot second story ! Keep it up.

If that isn't a promise to return ... soon ... For more training, and mutual pleasures for all - including the readers. Yes, a present that keeps giving. Speaking of "giving"; Thank You for giving your fans another reason to cum back for more. I assume you received many replies, lengthy private emails from other females who follow in your path. I wish I "knew" what such experienced women think, and recall from their experiences. Maybe you can coach and encourage them to write and memorialize their adventures ... As you are now producing.

Got me all wet too! Very exciting story - oh-so-visual and tittilating . Thanks and please keep writing!

Hugs & Kisses,

Di

Someone compared you too SILKSTOCKINGSLOVER. Let me second that. Keep writing and you too will be equally as good. The way you draw me into your stories, I feel as if I am there. Which makes me wish I was there. You have a talent. I look forward to you using it.

LOVED the concept (what guy wouldn't?) as well as your writing style. Someone wrote that you are an up-and-coming Silkstockingslover. You have the skills and potential; I hope you keep writing. WELL Done!

i will echo what others have said, your style brings the reader in and has us rubbing our crotches with every word. Very well done. I certainly was trying to put myself in his place, watching, then waiting to be invited, the being fully taken while having another participant and my only thought was I would have been cumming watching them make out on the couch. Great job and I eagerly await the next chapter of Meg's story.

For most men , her next present would be divorce papers ....

@Anon: They're not married, dumbass, didn't you read the story?

Gee, I've never had a birthday that was that exciting. If I can't have one like his then at least I can read about the fun times.

Holy fuck that was hot! Incredibly sexy. My birthday is next week. I'm certain that my wife won't go for the threesome, but I might need to ask for the pegging!

An other VERY hot and well written story - keep them coming!

Wonderful detail. Too bad the writer did not continue this series...

Love it! I wish there were more 'sesual' pegging stories. I personally love it, but don't enjoy hard/rough/dom-type stuff....when my ex used to peg me, slowly grinding and pumping, and kissing me deeply, telling me how hot it was, I would go friggin nuts!

Meg is a keeper. Full stop. Period.

I gave you a 5.0 (100% or A+) for this story.

I loved this story!

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I am a 60 y/o married man. However, I must confess that, occasionally, I pleasure myself by inserting a banana or a screwdriver handle in my ass. Yes, I can come that way.

☆☆☆☆☆ (5.0 = 100%)

Good little tail?

Both of your stories are great. Can’t wait to see what’s next.

This was such a hot read! Hope there’s more to this story because I can’t get enough!

Loved both your stories. Nice detail without being over the top. Good dom/sub play with love relationship. This story hot as a third is introduced to the relationship.

I hope their is more to come soon. Don't let this be the end .

I think Lexie should've gotten a turn at his ass too.

BAM! I’ve reached the mountain top… My God… I HAVE A DREAM! My trumpeta has achieved the colossal ending I was hoping for… Houston we have achieved orbit! Great story, my only complaint is I still want more… it was a birthday weekend and this was only one night… get back to the keyboard and do that clickity clack you do so well! Now, about the bio… no gender? Oh hell, I don’t care, where do I send the car, the house keys and the 4 C’s… Color, Cut, Clarity and Carats!

If I judged your ability right… Disney’s dark theme park will have an attraction dedicated to you 🤔

Great E-Ticket ride and please write some more… I want an annual pass 😊🥵❤️‍🔥🦶😊💗 BBB

What Bonebibrain said. Could you imagine this really happening, O you did.

Thanks this is a good read

I would love to bend over for both Meg and Lexie! Use me for your pleasure! Crack my nuts! Stuff my butt! Sick my cock as I lick your clits!

More!!!! What else can I say. 5-stars