All Comments on 'Mel Takes My Manhood'

by RSchwuler

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Manhood

To long and boring RAv

ryanlvr7ryanlvr7over 5 years ago
Loved This Story

Other than the dumpster part I loved this story. I would love to find a man like Mel to take away all my masculinity. My little 4.5 inch clit could never be mistaken for a cock and I need to find a man like to train me to be the submissive sissy God meant me to be. Why else would he have given me such a little clit.

Hope for more stories.

Rwa4768Rwa4768over 5 years ago
Not the best

Some parts of this story were good, but some parts were just disgusting. There is nothing in the least erotic about garbage .

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
5 stars

I am only 3+1/2" erect and would love to have Mel spank me and fuck my ass (and I'm straight).

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Depraved!

Utterly depraved, but loved it! Would have liked to have read of more reluctance and shock & horror, by victim, but story was 5 star relentless filth!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Write more

Missed your content! Hope you make more!

subbi42subbi42almost 5 years ago

absolut supergeil - wäre toll wenn es weiter gehen würde

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Totally Emasculated

Great story. Looking forward to another chapter. Can't wait to see how Mel's plans for Petey continue to develop as he makes Petey his total slut.

Anthony1965Anthony1965over 4 years ago
Love the Story

I absolutely loved the story and it was very well written. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

SomeWhiteBoySomeWhiteBoyover 4 years ago
Amazing

I first read this story about a year ago and now that I finally made an account, I'd like to say thank you. This story completely twisted my sexuality. I used to only hook up with fit guys my age, but this got me curious. Since then I've been a sub for fat old guys almost exclusively and even got my girlfriend in on the fun. So very glad you updated this recently with more parts

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Loved It

So Fucking Hot

Mariner87Mariner87over 2 years ago

Very hot, the idea of being taken and trained ti be a sex toy for a dom drives me wild.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Amazing detail! Filthy and depraved...and right up my alley! This entire series definitely made my sub dicklet hard, Sir!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I need a man like Daddy 4yourpleasureiam

Rimbaud17Rimbaud17over 1 year ago

Holy hell. Halfway down the first page, I wanted to be naked across Melvin's lap. Later there were a couple of passages that I didn't like as much, but that's kind of the point, right? By then I had surrendered and you had completely had your way with my mind ...

secretsissy02secretsissy02about 1 year ago

A classic! RSchwuler is the undisputed master of this depraved genre!

4yourpleasureiam4yourpleasureiam4 months ago

2 years and I still feel my little limp penis stir as I read this story. Yes I am a weak little boy who longs for a Man to be my Daddy. Please , someone, own me. Body and mind.

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Kinky dom* in NY, into kinky stuff, like writing stories with a heavy mindf-ck element. All of my stories are intended to be wild and over-top fantasies with serious boundary-pushing and mistreatment of semi-willing subs. I'm not going for realism, romance or uplift. Read at y...

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