All Comments on 'Melanie Ch. 05'

I came across this story only today, when Part 5 was published; I really don't know how I managed to miss such a wonderful tale!

You write very well and have the knack of making things seem so real - it takes quite a bit to get me 'hot and bothered', but this did it!

Thank you - I can hardly wait for the next Part.

traci

I can't wait to see Melanie's descent into her submission and the outcome of the struggle that Roberta is facing..a part of me hopes that Melanie doesn't go back to her old life and ends up with a satisfying Master..thanks so much for the update! jacinta xxo

It is a struggle to know which way to go! Perhaps the answer is to let the young women continue their struggle for freedom for it is all the more sweeter having worked hard for it. Perhaps the ones that fail to gain their freedom don't really want it? Perhaps they need a master to fulfill their lives. I guess we can only wait and see where these characters lead us - Gary

What believable characters! It's a joy to read. Just don't tell us how it turns out. I'd rather wait and be surprised!

A very enjoyable and believeable chapter. i hope we do not have to wait to long for the next installment.

It would be fun if you finished these series instead of starting new ones; it seems you get bored with your compliant creations.

I get requests for other stories and start another one off that becomes a series. Either that or have an idea and it takes off. Many write wanting the woman to be dominated and submissive and being humiliated. Other readers hate that and I love women, seeing them as stronger emotionaly than men. Well each to his own. I keep trying to get away form this theme but it seems very popular - from women and men! Storyteller