All Comments on 'Melina Job at the Mall'

Hope this very well written but too short story is true. Hope you continue it with longer chapters.

Nice little story. Just reading it, I started to feel like a dirty old man.

Your stories are brilliant. Straight to the point and enough description and plot to "serve their purpose" as it were. Perfect erotic/one handed reading. ;O)

You should definitely expand on this story. I would love to read about her downward spiral into a sex kitten for her customers. Not in a creepy, sad way but in a sexual liberation type of way.

so fucking hot pls write more!

What a hot fantasy. Wish there were really girls like that. Cock was hard from start to finish visualizing.

more episodes please.