by 100 Angry Bananas
Story is progressing nicely. Good mix of some hot sex and an actual plot.
I've actually seen a lightning bolt hit the top of a skyscraper a few times. This was a really good spot to use that imagery.
Also, good to see the characters acting "true to character", even after the drug-induced sex.
This makes me think of a porno "Little Shop of Horrors". Can I option "MELVIN! The Musical"?
Can't wait to read the next installment!