All Comments on 'Melvin's Magic Love Juice Ch. 08'

i am continually surprised in your story telling. i honestly expected melvin to be doing some threesome by now...followed by an orgy

excellent writing. the story is well spaced and its not rushed, slowly building up to its end.

just don't like how you end it with the ex-wife and the gun. but i think its really just me

kudos, and look fwd for next work