by liqueur
So much waffle and padding of the story that, quite frankly, I lost interest and could not give a shit if the guy ever got to fuck her. Serious editing needed.
BY THE EARS!
Bring on some more!
This is a superbly erotic story, beautifully told, which is both very arousing and very interesting as an account of the author's evolving sexuality. I loved it! Thanks so much Liqueur!