All Comments on 'Memories of a Thwarted Coup'

by KeithD

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MarcLuciFerMarcLuciFer4 months ago

I've said it several times now, that this is the kind of story you do best. And once again you've proven that by transporting me somewhere to watch rather than just read about what was happening in this story. Perhaps it's something that comes with age, but even the somewhat melancholy ending of the protagonist seemingly ready to except whatever fate befalls him felt not only believable but also completely normal under the circumstances of the life he's led. Excellent story!

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Another sad, somewhat pensive ending. Well written.

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