All Comments on 'Memories of Holidays Past Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Beautiful love story

Ending as it does with a sweet kiss, Memories of Holidays Past is really a love story, and deserves to be in the Romance category. This may not have been apparent at the beginning, in chapter one, but by the end of the second chapter it certainly is. This story's chief flaw is its brevity, and it needs to be continued.

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