All Comments on 'Merry'

Keep up the male tone! I skip your stories when you write as a woman. Thanks.

Continue the story!!

Crap....

Your writing style always paints wonderful pictures in my head :) idk what everyone else is complaining about. Keep up the awesome work! Male or female this was great. Subtle, without being too jarring.

You always know how to get me wet. I love your stories. You should write a whole novel. 50 shades of grey ain't got nothing on you.

Missing negation

would let me attend - wouldn't let me attend

I would really hope that he would start dating her, now that she knows what sex is, but without the knowledge of how to discourage men, she will be taken advantage of otherwise