All Comments on 'Mesmerized'

I got caught up in this story and now I am late to work. A master class in mixing horror and eroticism and weaving it all through a suspenseful plot. I could read stories like this all day long...so I think I will!

Well done. Good luck in the contest.

"Wow! That was... intense." - Shawn

I think this line accurately describes this entire piece. From begining to end, the tension builds to an explosive conclusion. Your ability to seemlessly weave suspenseful horror and sizzling erotic is unparalleled. Short, but not too short, and leaving a lasting impact in which the reader desires more.

I only hope that this is not where this story ends. Please, keep writing! There are many more possible twists and turns before this horrific drama unfolds completely. Good luck in the contest -- you have my vote. 5*

It is simply a well written story. It is easy and enjoyable to read, engrossing from the onset. The fact that the erotic scenes are enthralling, scorching...elevates this beyond most other stories in my opinion.

All the usual glowing words ofvpraise seem so silly right now. You write madterfully.yout characters come to life with a depth &msyurity thatvis staggering. This is brilliant,madterful writing, suspenseful,scary,shocking & piwerfully, beautifully erotic. 5 stars. Stellar storytelling.