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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Excellent fantasy story

A 5

BigJim48BigJim48about 3 years ago
Great fantasy!

No way that would ever happen but it IS a great fantasy!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
The Return of the King of Tits

I'm so fucking glad you're back!

rovuzegrovuzegabout 3 years ago

Great stories, as always.

If I had any criticism, it! would! be! for! fewer! exclamation! marks!, which! break! up! the! flow! of! the! story!!

DDDDaveDDDDaveabout 3 years agoAuthor
S!O!R!R!Y!!!

With out exclamation points how is the reader to know where to put the emphasis?

I use them to help the many readers who need that guidance!

Thanks for the input. I'm afraid it won't effect my future works but I do appreciate that you both read the story and took the time to provide feedback.

DDDDave

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