All Comments on 'Microchips Ch. 04'

It was a bit like an appetizer. It didn’t move the story along but it was fun. I really am enjoying this and I look forward to the next chapter. Thanks.

but it was a long wait for a short story. its 5 stars - as is every chapter here - but hopefully next time we'll get a little more action. the sex scene was fantastic!!!

Sounds like things are going to get interesting!

Exciting stuff and hope you keep going. Anxious for the next chapter right now.

think it could get any hotter with Dale and Natalie, but this romp was. You deliver the details and the heat. Great job and keep it up! Now I wonder about what the deal will be with the microchips.

By the way, love how you've written Natalie as so playful. It's so adorable and endearing. :)

Ok now you have to work faster and deliver next chapter...