All Comments on 'Midsummer Fest Ch. 02'

I hope people start paying more attention to this story, so you can get the feedback that most Lit authors seem to need if they're going to continue writing. :-)

please post more chapters?

And PLEASE get some dirty deets on miss Lanhua Lee entering a pod!

Missed chapter 1 so went back read it and this installment and was very impressed with the story and how it came together. I hope that by the way you left it at the end of chapter 2 you are not done telling this wonderful tale.

SciFi as it should be!