All Comments on 'Midsummer'

It's truly an erotic story --- no, it's not really a story in the traditional sense,,, it is more like an encompassing description of something magnificent!

And that "something" is love, or something like that, which I've heard so much about but never gotten to know it.

The hair between his teeth --- though no Shakespeare in geniusness --- as part of his fibre allowance, I thought, was haliriously witty!

I didn't realize "Shall I compare thee to a summer's day" was written toward a man!

Erotica at its finest. Thank you.

and it's great to see you posting your work on Literotica, where so many readers will see it!

ohio

It's so rare to see literate erotica. It's not just well-written, it's well-conceived, start to finish.

The literary references were icing on the cake.

I have read and enjoyed many of your stories and this is no exception.

Boyd

A sweet, loving story. A true romance.

Just for the suspense, there could have been some obstacles somewhere - a rival - maybe some kind of threat to the relationship.

All together a VERY nice story that satisfies my romantic soul :-)

5 stars from Xluckylee for a very erotic story done extremely well.