All Comments on 'Mike & Melody Ch. 02'

This story just keeps getting hotter. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Lying, not laying. Learn the difference between those words. :)

It seemed, that this time tale writes, someone adult and NORMAL.

So it would seem.. up to: - (...) "..and she was clean shaven"..

Unfortunately, it turned out that this is another, tiny deviant with "clean shaved brain".

Fabulous story so far can't wait for next chapter 3som with mom? What will happen with Deanna could be interesting

loved it, can't wait for next chapter

Very hot and exciting. Looking forward to the next instalment.

Please hurry with part 3!!!! i cant wait :-)

You've combined several genre's here in an interesting way and managed to do it with a solid base of love so it comes across as realistic and the characters seem real, nice, and easy to identify with.

Some minor flaws with grammar/spelling and one big missed opportunity. The scene with Mike and Linda should have been drawn out more with intimacy and cautious foreplay. This is a huge psychological encounter for both of them and there should have been a lot of tenderness, hesitancy, touching, kissing and reassuring each other. Even a tear or two would have been appropriate.

Keep up the good work. Looking forward to the next installment.

Thanks for the feedback, mountaincat4. I appreciate the comments and suggestions. Hopefully I can continue to improve the stories and have them enjoyable to read.

melody looks out for others, esp. her husband...

wouldn't a guy love being married to her...

Very hot!! Love the gradual and realistic way the sex has progressed. So tired of the stories where the son has a 12" cock and the mom with the 48DD tits catches him jering off and immediately fucks him. This story has progressed in stages with the sex which is nice. Am intrigued with how Deanna is going to fit in.

This chapter was much better than the credit it has been given. The build-up/anticipation is A-1. I like where I think it is going. 5*

Can't wait for Linda and Melody get back together. Hope Linda shaves Melody pussy for her