All Comments on 'Mike & Melody Ch. 03'

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JoJoJuddJoJoJuddabout 9 years ago
This is a fun story - read it and smile

Not my cup of tea, but well written, uplifting, and just plain fun. Nice work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
More please

Lovely way of bringing the family together. Hot to read about Linda and her family loving. Where's Uncle Bob these days? He should come and visit- make it family foursome. And what about Melody's family? Bring them into the picture.

Very hot indeed.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 7 years ago

Very well written. I'm glad not a lot of time was spent on Linda's past but I would have liked to have seen more sex with Linda, Mike and Melody.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Still liking this but...

i like to see more detail about the sex rather than the sex starts and then the next scene is the next day, etc. But the many players is interesting. 5*

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I write for the fun of it. The stories are pure fantasy, nothing more. I also try to write where the characters are realistic and believable. While I do try to eliminate as many errors as possible, I am not an English major nor a professional writer so there are apt to be err...

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