by Anopheles
I loved it... a couple of mistakes with the names, but nothing bad.
Really loved this story. Hope it continues with the slutty sisters performing at home when the parents are away.
that was a great story you should really make a sequal to it i really liked it
only a virgin would get off on this trash go back to school and learn.
you can't even keep the names straight delete and rewrite using a good editor before reposting as is this is a first draft that never should have been posted. to make matters worse you never even finished it be a good loser and delete it now.
if he didn't get along with them WHY would he ever want to fuck them? seems he would wonder what kind of STDs he might catch from them. KEEP IT ATLEAST SOME WHAT REALISTIC AND BELIEVABLE PLEASE.
Some parts get confusing with use of the wrong name. Overall quite enjoyable. I hope there is a sequel.