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It's not all that bad really. They treat me well enough and I know Sara loves me...she wouldn't force me to keep doing what Annie wanted if she didn't think that I enjoyed it. Truth is...I wouldn't have it any other way.
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CybrOtakualmost 2 years agoThis was really hot for a short story! As others have said, it feels a bit rushed through the ending... but that happens some times when you lose the passion or focus on a particular story. Still really awesome though. I definitely think it should have a higher rating :(. Maybe a revisit/revision now that it's been some time since posting. Even a decent length 2-part with this as the outline would do really well I think. Excellent Job!
Failedscoutalmost 8 years agoThis was a very good story up until the rushed ending. There should have been at least a chapter or two describing the dynamics and sex that the trio have.
Thank you for writing and posting here.
JamieFHFunalmost 8 years agoi so wish i was in Mike's place. Story really turned me on. i hope to hear more on Mike's sexual slavery. i hope you add some BBC friends (trans and men) for Mike to submit to and be humiliated publicly by all.
Please.
jamie
Charmster4evaalmost 8 years agoAmazing story and an orgasmic description as always Whiskey.
But for the first time, the story was not as romantically fulfilling as accustomed to.
The rushed pregnancy, the unreal transition from vengeance to forgiveness..
You can't do better Whiskey, you can do great !!
