All Comments on 'MILF 01'

One of the best stories I ever read on this site and I've read a ton of them!! Well written with just enough dirty words but not too many. Very, very well edited. I couldn't find a single spelling or grammar error and that's saying something for a story as long as this one. I love a story like this from the mom's perspective. And to include the aunt and cousin was brilliant! If I could have, I would have given it 10 stars! Please don't wait too long for chapter 2.

I don't normally like such long stories, but this one, wow!

but I wish you had left the beginning to include only the budding relationship between Sarah and Ben. If in future you wanted to add others to the mix you could have done it one at a time. As it is now, they do not get to be a couple, just the two of them.

Good story indeed. I'm looking forward to read what comes next, hehe. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work. ^__^

Just a little long...

Long but exciting. held my interest very well. Keep up the good work and I am looking forward to further works by you.

Yes it was long, but it had a good build to it. Made the last page more intense. Was a good story to stroke to, and wow and intense time at the end for the story characters as well as myself. Can't wait till the next segment and the orgy. Especially when the guys swap their moms. Hurry Hurry but don't hurry to much where you skimp on the lust.

I am a fan of the longer form stories so the length was not an issue for me. I prefer plot and character development over a quick 1 or 2 page stroker. If anything I think that the pacing revolving around the introduction of the niece may have been a little rushed. I enjoyed how you managed to use some fairly well worn plot devices in a fresh and engaging manner. Such as the way you used the sister's character to give "permission" for the protagonist to let go and enjoy the desire she was feeling for her son. All in all, well written and quite enjoyable. I am looking forward to the next installment.

Good writing, however, it got long long long.

By the time it got to Ben and Mom, I was

Bored senseless.

good story but it can became more sexy, dirty and a little slap on the butt is never wrong for a slut mother please

Definately one of the better ones. Great build up and character development. I look forward to the other two chapters. Thank you

milf 01 is a very good story its truly grat family incest story its note to long its just right I am just looking to reading chapter 2 Howe mom &aunt wrok to gether to make tthis wroke just loved it PLS give use more very soon TY you very much yours leann xxxxxx MAWH

ept me wet and on the edge.

but why, oh why, do some British writers have an inferiority complex about their culture, and try to write as though they were from the USA? (Cell, Mom, trunk instead of boot, freeway when there's nothing called a freeway here?)

So you just got a three, for being silly and kowtowing to the cousins across the Atlantic.

I like your writing style, and will be looking forward to the next installments.

Anticipation is a wondeful feeling. I can imagine a lot of exiting thing happening.

Wow! This is one hellava sexy and literate story. Well developed plot with steamy mother and son characters! Looking forward to more!

The slow build up and how his mother found the photo was great. Confiding in her sister was a brilliant idea, and the resulting confession was a stroke of genius. I am certainly looking forward to the aunt joining in and ultimately the 4/5some. Please bring it on soon.

the story is f------g fantastic I can't wait till the next chapter is ready. AWESOME-------MORE,MORE,MORE. THANKS

An excellent story. Long, but worth the wait. I too wished you'd not told her sister that she could have him. That would have been a great sequel.

Looking forward to the next one though

Great build up and character development. Can't wait for MILF 02. Hurry!!

I love this, great build up, great teasing, group, exhibitionism, incest, nudity, I love this I can't wait for more. WOW!! And then there's Tina, Tony + Carol, God this is and will be my favorite story for a very long time. I can't wait to read the rest. THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU

Art

This story has several sequels just waiting to come out. great read from start to finish nice build up to the sex and wasn't rushed, like I said great story. can't wait to read more. great job.

Well written. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks

This story is brilliant. Couldn't wait to read the next Page. Bring on MILF 2

This is a wonderful storyline thus far, and I am anxiously awaiting many more chapters to come (Cum??) Definitely deserved the 5 Stars I gave it!!

A definite 5 Star, I'm sure you'll work all 4MILF's into the story.

Fact or fiction that is a great and explicit novel. Hope it is true.

I loved your story! It was very well written, and I got myself off twice while reading

the entire story. I hope you will submit the next series soon!

The story would have been great But way too LONG. 7 pages to much.

Seven pages was not too long aread. Suspense can be like a rare spice, it brightens the outcome.

Please continue!! Don't mind long stories. Do not stop!!!

cant wait for next part. Loved part 1

...This story, mind you i never like to read long stories but urs is truly an exception, 4 pages is my limit but, the build up here ws jst as thrilling...

When do i expect the next part? Coz this is the 1st story goin in my favourites list...

The only thing that was too long was the time between your last story and this one. lol

Congratulations! This story is a standard by which erotic stories of all subgenres should be measured. The story unfolds at a perfect pace, building excitement and anticipation on ebery page. Each sex scene builds on the ones that come before and the characters are not only beautiful bodies -- they are also warm believable human beings.

a great story what a very lucky son 2 have a mom so willing and understanding

not great, not bad, but ok.

I agree that you should embrace the "English" language and not let the yanks influence your usage by americanising it.

Absolutely love it!!! 5++++ stars.

Thousands of words to build up the scene, not my style but thank you for writing this story anyway but I will probably not read any more of it.

I must disagree with previous commentors. I think this is really wonderful. Even better than your other stories. Here you treat your characters well. I do agree that whether you are British or American, you should not change your word usage to fit one or the other. Misspelled words or incorrect punctuation ARE distracting, though. Such as a person from, say, India using the English language in whatever form. It becomes difficult to follow a story. Sarah and Ben are beautiful. Aunt Carol is beautiful also, but I would be careful with Tina. Too many characters can ruin a short story. This isn't a book where one can build many characters' history and individual personalities. I think, at this point, that Sarah should have her son to herself before the rest of the family intrudes into their private time. I like the build-up. It makes the eventual consumation of their love for each other all that much more beautiful. I have an affinity for Mother/Son love stories for good reason. This is very well done.

your story was wonderful. I enjoyed the story line, presentations and character. I will be reading the next chapter.

You story was really good until the addition of "Tony and Mom." That was a story killer as far as I am concerned,

I thought it was a good story, longer than I like and I would have liked it better if it were just Ben and Mom for a long time before getting others involved in their relationship, I think the others were being added to quickly. Would have liked it to be Ben and Mom for the first year. Still good. I liked it.

I was afraid that it would be phone, email, webcam etc. Forever. So boring until the real sex started, I don't know if I will read MILF 02, maybe later.

I really enjoyed the story line. Given my own life story I can see it happening just as you said. Well maybe not the cousin part, at least not so fast, so truly beleaveable.

Can't wait for the next installment.

LOVE every line

Your story is so hot and sexy. Loved the way you included the online parts. Would love a story involving texting but that's just my opinion

I loved the dialogue. Made it so much hotter; realistic. 5*.

really long and boring. literally skipped pages so i could get to the actual fucking, which was also disappointing.

Good build up. Sometimes a little too predictable. Some grammar errors, but a good story.

There is, I’ve always believed, a fine line between telling a story slowly so as to build the tension and excitement and keep the reader enthralled with the story, and dragging the story story out so slowly that the reader just loses interest. I’m afraid that it’s the latter for me. Seven pages and I am bored with the story. Maybe it’s me, maybe I’m just too jaded, but it’s seven pages with for all practical purposes, no sex. Unless you count a little web cam action, or maybe a brief lesbian encounter. And even that didn’t really interest me. The writing was pretty good, but I just don’t have enough time to get through four more chapters like this one. Good luck, book_man_03, but I am gone.

TtHERE A LOT OF SICK MINDS IN THIS WORLD

The build up was killing me. Great story. Thanks for sharing.

Vey nice story but I think there was to much story and not enough sex maybe if you write more of this you can add more sex will have to wait and see!! Still gave it 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That she is fucking her own son put me off this. Kinda ruined it for me, if I'm honest.

That's because I know now that this going to end up as yet another dreary swapping session, turning into a free for all like so many other stories. Sharing isn't hot or sexy, it's meh. It diminishes the mother son bond. What they have isn't special, if any swinging dick can have in on the action. It means that the mother and son don't share a special bond, it just means they are available in that moment, and anyone else that's available can get some too.

Thanks for the offering, but I'm reading no further.

Loved the story and the characters, loved the sex descriptions too