All Comments on 'MILF Model Melody'

More featuring her would be welcome too

Your model is really a MILF, you lucky dog...

Nice story,great model,I'm jealous.

A well illistrated story....damm she is hot

The story was great,but posting photos of a professional model ripped from the Internet is not cool, does she know you used her photos? Have you heard of copyright?

to respond to the comment above. yes, i have, and i do. i own the photos. read the preamble for clarification instead of just sprinting straight to the pictures so you can download them.

Thanks for writing this story. The pictures of the model brought it to life. And I can only say I wished my first was like that.

1st timer, with pix and a do it yourself guide. TK U MLJ LV NV

well written, and well supported by the pics! Real life fantasy!

Fucking hot

where can we find more pictures of her?

if you pm or email me i'll let you know where you can get more pics.

... or i'll sell you some if you have paypal! *grin*

Excellent story with the pics. Your model is a delight. I don't know how far Literotica will allow in allowing explicit sex photos but 'over 18, consensual, and no copyright problems would seem to be 'internet-legal'.

nope, lit doesn't. i had 2 pics deleted by the editor because they were outside lit guidelines. these were spread shots, not overly explicit in the grand scheme, but too much for here.

God, as a young guy I could only dream of her giving that body to me and feeling me cum three times today looking at her. Once while I read the story and twice looking at her body and beautiful face. I soooooo want to have her. I e-mailed you and requested you send me back her internet address. Please I have to see those photos that Lit. wouldnt allow. Have you had sex with her yourself. She is so beautiful

Good story, but fucking hell! What a truly awesome milf you've used as a model. The epitome of a hot woman, and those tits!!

what more can be said!!!

....but I'm wondering if the author is deleting comments because someone must be out there besides me that finds the model not much besides the boobs. What the fuck kind of standards do you people have? That's a Milf?

looks like you're in a minority though, pete.

Looks like you enjoyed yourself there GA my love.

You'll have to get a team together like Ben Dover and do some exploring... it is getting quite common in the UK these days, especially with MILF's and single mums old enough to enjoy some wicked exploration.

Very sexy model! BTW, Pistolpackinpete tends to criticize without having ANY submissions of his own. It's pitiful and basically he amounts to being a troll, nothing more.

Hot story, hot model! Loved it!

Wow. Greatg writing and well thought out. The model absoluely, and withut doubt, made it so much more interesting and the hopes that each page brougnt more photos.

I willl follow your writing carefully and absolutely will read multiple times any story with her in it.

Thank you for her and you

Good story, But what a wonderful pair of tits

She would have been even more sexy if she had been wearing stockings/hold up

stockings.

But beggars can t be choose

G xx

worth every stroke... funny how a big dick changes a woman's mind... This is an answer to a little secret....get your wife or GF too start taking erotic pictures... they will get turned on....

god damn, that model's tits are so fucking hot. i wish the photos were clickable to something larger so i could put them up on my wallpaper.

Absolutely amazing, the photos made it seem so realistic, and the detail in the story itself was fantastic. My one niggle was that we don't get to see the photos of Melody fucking herself with the vibrator-otherwise, bloody awesome

Well Geronimo,

You've done it again, another great story.

Good looking women those Yorkshire lasses.

I think you put a lot into your research, well done.

Now go and lie down.

Don

Hopefully Melody telling John "He could take pictures of their fucking next time" means there will be more stories with pictures of Melody's Hot Body with her beautiful BIG TITS!! As I looked at Melody's pictures again I wore myself out, with a big grin on my face! Her whole body, from face to feet, is Fucking Fantastic!! The story is good ,too!!

Your going to think I'm crazy but your model also has a great smile !

Five star excellence that leaves you drooling for more.

Looked a lot like your model...oh, the things she taught me!

Good story to boot...time well spent.

Thanks

Engaging smile shapely figure and a marvellous pair of knockers - what a hot woman. She does it for me.

This was a great sexy story with great photos, but it would have been nice to see the full frontal nude photo; would just be the finishing touch!!!

but where are the pictures???

the pictures are embedded into the text. or do you mean pictures regarding the ending of the scene? if so, Lit rules won't allow images like that.

5 stars.

Great body yes sir!

YUMMY

When your stories show up on "random selections" I reread and review them. Your stories/text match your photos exquisitely. Your model, Melody, is sumptuous and fun at the same time… no small achievement. Great job!

Melody is so good looking, so cute, and looks like so much fun I have to give five stars every time she appears.

What a fun cutie!

Warning; This post contains use of the "n" word. The "n" in reference is myself.

Very hot story. Beautiful model. I thoroughly enjoyed his infatuation with her. I had a similar response to Melody. The second I saw a look under her skirt, those blue panties hiding her sweet pussy, I was hooked.

I am a fat black nigger who worships white women. I know this story has gotten the attention of primarily men, who love big lovely tits.

When I fuck my cunt thinking of her, I'm so hot and bothered, I know I won't be able to last that long. So my mind goes straight to her pink pussy lips. My black face buried in her sweet white pussy, and lapping up her precious juice.

Oh how I would love to be Melody's nigger.

Mark for the text: excellent, ★★★★★- (5-)!

Mark for the text: excellent, 5.0 = 💯%!

geronimo_appleby is an excellent story teller

Bravo Melody! What a salacious little smile you possess. The rest of you is pretty damn neat, too! Bravo!

It was a simple story with just fun. Thank you.