by DamienDeath20
Incredible I love your writing style. Great story I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Hope you write more. Best I have read in a while. very good job. And you set up the potential for so much more. LOVE it. Keep up the good job.
WOW you have a knack of combining intense eroticism and taboo in an absolutely intoxicating way. Please never stop!
The Monstergirl thing isn’t my usual sort of kink, but this story definitely did it for me.
I’m looking forward to when Bailey starts taking bigger drinks from this girl. ;)
The hatred I feel when I check multiple times a day... always your account first... when I stare at my phone for more works... then I finish reading the occasional new work... then I realize that I have nothing else to look forward too and I hate life for not having more of your stories... fuck my life
Finally your beautiful style is back I could hardly stand the wait! This isn't what I was expecting but it's soo amazing 😍
Y'all is plural because it is a shortened "you all." So many times while reading this I had to stop myself from thinking about who else is there.
The correct colloquialism you wanted is "ya" like "look at ya bein' slack jawed over my cock." If it was was a crowd then it would be "look at y'all bein' slack jawed over my cock."
Otherwise the story is good and look forward to this story moo-ving on.
It's "y'all" not "ya'll" because "y'all" is a contraction of "you all." That makes "y'all" plural. Nobody refers to one other person as "y'all." That really ruined immerision into the story. I'll also assume you've never been to a farm. Pretty good otherwise.
Hey fuck that, I'm from west Texas and we say y'all for one person all the time....
I'm from Texas. People say Y'all to one person all the time. Y'all can be anywhere from 1 to 5 people, all y'all is 4 or more.
My summer work on uncles farm was never like this!
Closest was watching uncle shove his whole arm up a cows vagina to make sure the calf was positioned front hooves first so it wouldnt breach at birth
A few things kinda bothered me.
- Dialogue in all caps.
Idk why, it just seems hokey to me, really takes me out of it. I found myself skipping some bits of dialogue because I couldn't take them seriously.
- Cathyl's dick size.
22 inches? Thats crazy. I can't image how that won't cause some irreparable damage. Really shouldn't be more than 10, imo. Hyper/macro/mega just isn't sexy.
The story "Something Better" by this author is easily one of the very best shemale top/male bottom stories but creatures with horns don't do it for me. I didn't rate this story because that should be based on how good a story is and not the subject matter but I don't like when good authors waste their time with stories like this. This should be in the non-human category, not the transexual section. The supernatural makes my dick softer than a 3 day old taquito.
The caps dialogue is what it is, I only use it when someone's reeeally shouting lol
And if it helps she's not 22 inches, just twenty x)
I wish there was a 6th star, so I regretfully only vote it 5
Nice! Looking forward to seeing what the milk does to him, maybe making that booty much thicker :D
I can already imagine her tricking him into drinking her cum for the protein, but how in the world will she trick him into preparing his ass for a 20 inch horse cock?
Looking forward to seeing the thicker drink, as I guess it may be piss
Omg such a great story! Please keep it going!
Love it is so great I want to keep cumming back. See hat I did there but please keep this going.
I’m really hoping this continues soon, I’ve read this chapter a handful of times, can’t wait for what Cathyl has in store for the little guy.
Chapter 2 is pending, sorry it's taking so long @_@
I love this story. I wonder if Bailey becomes more manly to take cate of Chatyl's needs.