All Comments on 'Milking The Bull'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Amazing!!!

Incredible I love your writing style. Great story I can’t wait for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
AWSOME

Hope you write more. Best I have read in a while. very good job. And you set up the potential for so much more. LOVE it. Keep up the good job.

it_tinglesit_tinglesover 5 years ago

WOW you have a knack of combining intense eroticism and taboo in an absolutely intoxicating way. Please never stop!

Miah_HMiah_Hover 5 years ago
Not my usual thing

The Monstergirl thing isn’t my usual sort of kink, but this story definitely did it for me.

I’m looking forward to when Bailey starts taking bigger drinks from this girl. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Hatred

The hatred I feel when I check multiple times a day... always your account first... when I stare at my phone for more works... then I finish reading the occasional new work... then I realize that I have nothing else to look forward too and I hate life for not having more of your stories... fuck my life

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Yes!

Finally your beautiful style is back I could hardly stand the wait! This isn't what I was expecting but it's soo amazing 😍

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Southern colloquialism

Y'all is plural because it is a shortened "you all." So many times while reading this I had to stop myself from thinking about who else is there.

The correct colloquialism you wanted is "ya" like "look at ya bein' slack jawed over my cock." If it was was a crowd then it would be "look at y'all bein' slack jawed over my cock."

Otherwise the story is good and look forward to this story moo-ving on.

nutcase666nutcase666over 5 years ago
Awsome

Please give us more

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

It's "y'all" not "ya'll" because "y'all" is a contraction of "you all." That makes "y'all" plural. Nobody refers to one other person as "y'all." That really ruined immerision into the story. I'll also assume you've never been to a farm. Pretty good otherwise.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Y'all

Hey fuck that, I'm from west Texas and we say y'all for one person all the time....

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
dude bro

This story is amazing!

it continues right?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Hottest story I've read in a while, look forward to more.. Bravo!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Y'all

I'm from Texas. People say Y'all to one person all the time. Y'all can be anywhere from 1 to 5 people, all y'all is 4 or more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Summer work

My summer work on uncles farm was never like this!

Closest was watching uncle shove his whole arm up a cows vagina to make sure the calf was positioned front hooves first so it wouldnt breach at birth

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Loved it

Great story, good detail and style and very likeable characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Reallly Really Really Good

can't wait for the next the chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great but...

A few things kinda bothered me.

- Dialogue in all caps.

Idk why, it just seems hokey to me, really takes me out of it. I found myself skipping some bits of dialogue because I couldn't take them seriously.

- Cathyl's dick size.

22 inches? Thats crazy. I can't image how that won't cause some irreparable damage. Really shouldn't be more than 10, imo. Hyper/macro/mega just isn't sexy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Y'all whack it to monsters?

The story "Something Better" by this author is easily one of the very best shemale top/male bottom stories but creatures with horns don't do it for me. I didn't rate this story because that should be based on how good a story is and not the subject matter but I don't like when good authors waste their time with stories like this. This should be in the non-human category, not the transexual section. The supernatural makes my dick softer than a 3 day old taquito.

DamienDeath20DamienDeath20over 5 years agoAuthor
@ Anonymous

The caps dialogue is what it is, I only use it when someone's reeeally shouting lol

And if it helps she's not 22 inches, just twenty x)

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Only comment I can make

I wish there was a 6th star, so I regretfully only vote it 5

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Excellent

Nice! Looking forward to seeing what the milk does to him, maybe making that booty much thicker :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Can't wait!

I can already imagine her tricking him into drinking her cum for the protein, but how in the world will she trick him into preparing his ass for a 20 inch horse cock?

stanleysfanstanleysfanover 5 years ago
Just amazing

Looking forward to seeing the thicker drink, as I guess it may be piss

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Amazing please it needs a SECOND PART!!!!

Omg such a great story! Please keep it going!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Oh sooo great

Love it is so great I want to keep cumming back. See hat I did there but please keep this going.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Chapter 2?

I’m really hoping this continues soon, I’ve read this chapter a handful of times, can’t wait for what Cathyl has in store for the little guy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
2nd and 3rd chapter

2nd chapter is on hentai foundry and 3rd is on patreon

DamienDeath20DamienDeath20over 4 years agoAuthor
Second chapter coming!

Chapter 2 is pending, sorry it's taking so long @_@

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Pretty hot.

I love this story. I wonder if Bailey becomes more manly to take cate of Chatyl's needs.

NewOldGuy77NewOldGuy77almost 3 years ago

Hmmmm...5 stars for creativity, I’ll give you that...

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