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by pop_54

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voluptuary_manquevoluptuary_manqueover 16 years ago
No, no, no.

No one, no matter how skilled, can tell a story with unidentified dialog. Completely incomprehensible. See an editor. I'm a published author and I use editors. Trust me on this.

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