by TarnishedPenny
Fabulous writing! Wonderful descriptions, pacing and climax--succinct and well done! 5*
Wonderful story! Her command and confidence is very sexy. I love the little twists within such a short story with each new act. And his warning at the end was fabulous!
Such fabulous writing - and OH SO SEXY!
OMG to have a partner like you....ha ha
Loved it to bits!
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