by secretme
I so want Rillan and Mira to be able to find love....and be together. As usual your writing is perfect...looking forward to more...
I know you said there were a lot of revisions so I can't wait to read the final version. Seems very interesting.
I think I 'll have to read the finnal edition to understand this turn. I do hope that you will flesh out the politic of the Durids in this world some more and explain how they feel and think of Rillan as well as how they turned him into a vamp. Still well written and I think this could turn a bit of a 2d story in toa fuller 3d version. So for me, yes, an interesting read.
Please give this one a happy ending and write soon. I think they both deserve to be together.
They are meant to be together and i hope they get that chance. Great writing. PJ xx
...to see more. What's going to happen to Liam now that Mira is back? Or Rillan for that matter...Please let us know soon.
Rillan may think he's doing the right thing but they belong together. I hope she goes back and changes his mind!
absolutely horrible. Rillan is such a deuce. I loved it, don't be fooled by the title of the comment. Can't wait for the next attachment. (I hate gossip, that includes people who gossip)
Any chance that this isn't the end??? I love this story almost as much as Leader of the Pack and would hate to see it end so suddenly.
I await the next chapter with longing and just a little trepidation.
I love the story, I just hope there is moor it can't just end like that please let me know
I've absolutely fallen in love with this story and have been following it since the first chapter. It's a magnificent piece of work and you are a fantastic writer. I can't wait for the book to be out. Though it wouldn't hurt either if you continue the story here on Litero. lol
awesome work. I just happend to click on it and wow. I did not stop reading. will read other work as well
I hope you write more soon. I love your stories. I cant wait for more.
This chapter was intresting...and i do hope that Rellian and Mira will be together again...
How can he send her away. I have to keep reading, but I am afraid that it will be even sadder.
I didnt see that coming I am hoping that they get together again they have so much further to go I dont think her character is for normal life so to speak
This is so well written and thought out.. I'm a usual novel reader so I find myself overly critcal but here I find myself almost skipping along entranced by your winding stories and need to pry myself from reading if something comes up.
Thanks so much!
Next chapter :)