by StoryTeller07
Thanks for writing! Submissive rich women are the best, and adding another slave keeps kicking it up more.
Don't get me wrong, your series was a big turn-on, so thanks much! But it could have been much better if you had relied on other artifices to humiliate Geraldine other than the constant and crude references to pet-girl. Try to imagine the girl breaking up the couple's marriage by humiliating her before her husband. It could be slow, sleazy and underhanded. Miranda could have "just dropped in" on them while they were dining at a fine restaurant, get herself invited to have a drink with them and then, through any number of artifices, show that she was in control of the wife. Perhaps, not all at once, but enough to cause Geraldine both huge embarassment and sexual excitement. Miranda could also exert her authority among Geralidine's socialite friends or even the neighbors. There are also sorts of possibilities that fit into real life situations.
Anyway, that's how I see things. Thanks for the text and keep up the good work!