All Comments on 'Miranda Kim'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
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dayum nigga calm yo shit down talkin about assassins and shit nigga yo crazy mufakka

WoodsLord_3540WoodsLord_3540almost 6 years ago
WHAT!

Nice tale about non-consensual that turned into her asking for more. Nice slut. I liked him leaving her tied; too bad she got out so easily.

But what is that post about? Damn strange.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great work

Very hot story and I liked how you are really developing this character into something deeper. Jack has been very busy fucking women of every origin and race. It would be hot if he fucked and impregnated a kraut, maybe in his army days he’s stationed in Germany and leaves a permanent gift to some lucky lady? I love the detail and the sexiness you put into it. You are doing great

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Hot! Really like this story. Gave you a 5= (4.6/5 = 92%)!

Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Hot!

Extremely hot story, would love to see more of Miranda in your other stories. We love seeing jack knock up hotties right and left

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

After making Jack one of the least likeable main characters in erotica, now he is evolving into a more rounded character.

WargamerWargamer3 months ago

Cuck shit not in fetish always gets 1/5

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I write because I enjoy it. I've been weaving erotic stories since I was a teenager - first with my sister, then by myself. I have published my stories on a variety of sites. I'm always looking to improve. So send me your feedback! My Jack Grierson series of stories is a bod...