All Comments on 'Miranda's Embarrassing Day Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Miranda's Embarrasing day

This becomes Trevstories embarrassing effort.

Too short and incomplete. Clearly, it's not ready for posting.

To end it with the god awful TO BE CONTINUED is acknowledgement of the failure. This effort fails to stand up on its own.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

I liked it. Not every story has to have something crazy in it. I like a good simple but sexy story like this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Yea, the story was a bit short, but good enough to have me looking forward to more.

mikewozeremikewozereabout 5 years ago
Looking forward to pt. 2

Enjoyed it.

Hope she doesn't decide she likes being exposed though, I find ENFs much more erotic :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Great Start!

Sexy, funny & interesting. I hope you continue it. I agree with the other commentor about having her not like it. I also prefer stories involving ENFs.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Can’t wait for part 2 get story keep it up

Shockwave000Shockwave000over 2 years ago

lol you can't leave us hang like this

William_WoodWilliam_Woodover 2 years ago

I liked it in it's own right. Petite + big butt is a contradiction. You should have just said she was short, and given her whatever curves you wanted.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

is it unfinished cos it was you who pinched her car and her towel?

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