Try writing a story WITHOUT identifying race, religion, or country of origin. I think once you limit yourself without your usual adjectives, you might recognize that this crap isn't storytelling and maybe you'll learn writing skills.
I am Samuelx. I am Black. I am Male. I was born in Cap-Haitien, Northern Haiti, and raised in Brockton, Massachusetts. I now live in Canada. I am the one and only Haitian Trickster, and quite simply live only by my own rules. I...