All Comments on 'Missionary Mother and Me Ch. 01'
by eecoop
- 9 Comments
Anonymousover 9 years agoInteresting concept but desperately needs more development. My rating is based on what your story can be if you put a little more time into it.
Anonymousover 9 years agoOMG....what a place to end first chapter....i was at least hoping he'd screw the maid.....no jerk time in first chapter....wrong way to end first chapter....hipe 2 is a lot mire feisty and with lots of jerk time.....please...
Trilloover 9 years agoGreat start, good lead into, near setting and description, and also the potential variables for your story direction. I think a bit more into developing the Dad,Mom relationship-/ son would extend the build up as well as flesh out the story . I like it for its potential and it's lead up
Cheers
Anonymousover 9 years agoDoes mom show him how to fuck the help, or is this just a come on, Is this a sucker move to keep us coming buck, all show and no go. It's an incest story, NOT A WHITE BOY FUCKS A BLACK GIRL story............
Anonymousover 9 years agoOmg, this is great! Could you not include the mom, let him fuck all the black babes there. Tht would be fucking hot!
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