All Comments on 'Mississippi Queen, Louisiana Man'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
A Story Teller

Strong exceptional work - you are appreciated - no trickery - no mindless disrespect - sensual and erotic - A Story Teller - more please - Thanks and Regards

sherlock40sherlock40over 19 years ago
A fantastic romantic story

You have a great way with words. Having been to New Orleans, it felt like I was walking the streets with them, somehow drawn into their world.

A truly excellent tale of finding your soulmate.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Great!!!

What a lovely, well written story.I have never been to New Orleans ,but feel as if I know some of the city.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Beautiful Story

Being an old dude I appreciate romantic stories about mature adults. Especially one as well written as this one was.

PapaMikePapaMikeover 4 years ago
Just a minor correction:

If French really was Mat's first language, he would never have called her "Mon chere," but "Ma cherie."

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

COULD HAVE ENDED BETTER. A GOOD STORY THAT WAS RUSHED IN THE END

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