by ThoughtStorm
I've liked this story, but I'm really really hoping things get resolved and the ending is happier than the middle. I mean a couple being forcibly broken up is kind of a nightmare scenario. It's been interesting though.
after reading the last two comments, i can't think anything else. what did you expect to see in this category, rainbows and fluffy cotton candy clouds? it is not a horror, well, not in a bad sense. it is wonderfully written. the plot is lovely. the suspense build is appropriate and nicely done. i love it and i am terribly interested. even if the end isn't what we would call "happy" it will be a happy ending to this story nonetheless. good job ThoughtStorm!
Naked for ever, gaining favor with mistress. If Adam performs as expected I bet he can blister Monica's ass, before long
Monica had to know her check would bounce. Did she want to be a submissive? Did she think the check wouldn't clear until after the week was over?