All Comments on 'Mixing Business with Pleasure'

I did enjoy the story and hope you keep writing. The last paragraph wrecked it for me. A submissive does not become the dom. Juliet would not leave a willing Slave behind.

You build a story well but then miss the the mark, changing a story from a good one to a great one.

This one was fantastic. You're so good at portraying powerful women and their mannerisms, even the most basic conversations between Juliet and Karen were hot.

My only complaint is that there wasn't more of their relationship developing. I would've loved to read about their next new interactions, and Karen's deepening submission to Juliet. Nonetheless an easy 5/5!

I'm very much into F/f domination type stories and always trying to find something new to read. Do you have any recommendations (yours/others)? Thanks!