All Comments on 'Modern Fairy Tales Ch. 13'

I really enjoyed that one. It's always nice when a bad guy can be taken down. Great job!

I liked it. I have tried to write a few stories myself, one of which was something like yours, but you are way better at it than I am. It would have been nice to have had a post script, detailing the successful lives of the "pigs" and the jail sentances for Mr Wolfe. Just a thought.