All Comments on 'Mom & 30+ Years Ch. 08'

Who is this strange poster who constantly writes post after post as "Reverend Mikki"? Who is this crackpot anyway? -A Troll??

You are a gifted writer. In your story Mom's Progressive Submission chapter 3 is the same as chapter 2. Will there be a Chapter 3? You kind of left us hanging on that story.

Doug

I've never seen a story end with so little resolution. Damn!

wish annony's comments would end, just end.

The wording of this chapter was for all intents and purposes the exact same wording I read in another chapter of one of your other stories listed earlier. Just about word for word. Not a good move there.

This almost seems like you wrote it to make the story go away poorly... Sorry, it's just not your best...

Your story for chapter 8 plan and simple "sucks" it has the feel of a major chunk of time and buildup that went missing badly.

I can not comment on this chapter because I do not know how to put my feelings to word. If just part of this story is based on someone life I am truly sorry for how it ended. If this story is totally fiction, I wish the author had stopped at the end oof chapter 7. It would have been better to be left hanging.

The first part was pretty good but the end sucked, hurting her was definitely not cool!

Bad sad ending.

Why did he have to hurt her. Not nice