by WillRightForSex
Too much, don’t mind the father and mother with the daughter and son but now mother on daughter is too much. Gratuitious sex at it’s worse, what’s next father and son??
I bet not!!
Giving this story a miss
5 stars. just wish it had been longer. but well done. looking forward to more
Please continue to write, you are very talented. I am looking forward to see how they bring the youngest daughter to their fun. Perhaps when she turns 18 they watch her with a female classmate or even a elder neighbor. Just a thought, please keep up the great work.
Loved the second chapter hope to read the next instalment soon. May be with all four playing together.
I am trying to wrap My head around reading a book by Harold Robbins, and when getting to the end I see, to be continued. He would never do this, as He never put out a novel till it was finished. I gave You 1 star, but, I feel that was more than You deserved.
I knew this was coming, as the story had to move along...
Nice mom/daughter action, was going SSSOOO WELL, until dad showed up like that, & just expected he would take a shower & join in.
Dad is an add...he should have (1) either backed out & left them to it, or (2) sat in a chair & watched...BUT NOT JUST TELL THEM TO GETREADY...inconsiderate at best...ASSHOLE! And this, from a man's point-of-view!
You received (4) stars, barely...