All Comments on 'Mom and Sis Ch. 01'

I love the little snipets of real life in a fantasy. It makes things so damn sweet. I like the development and flow of this story. Liked that he beat the hell out of the "best friend" that hit his sister! You need to continue this with additional chapters and more

development of each character. Oh the places you can take this. I wonder if his legs can be split like a wishbone? Between the mother and sister it could be tested, haha.

Really add to this and let it take flight. Thank you. GP

You are one incredibly talented author. I do not know if you could have made this chapter any more erotic. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Looking forward to the next chapter. Brilliant story

Nicely done, hopefully the next chapter will be up soon. It's my personal preference, but I'd have him do the mom before getting the sister to join in. Mommy comes first after all.

Very nicly done. Not a fast or quick. Slow and loving. Hopping the girls are committed to each other, and in time will become one big family .

its a really good start :)

But I can spell the word "quit"

Great start, looking forward to see where it goes!

Don't QUOT.

Nice start to an incest series. Cannot ait for the next chapter.

Calls for another chapter. Thanks

I hardly EVER ask for more chapters but this screams for it. But please don't make us wait weeks for it. If it's going to be awhile then please write the entire thing on part 2.

To ALL CAPS DUDE...GET A LIFE!

BTW couldn't login but I am live4thebj you can find me on this site.

Where's C2 ? Need to post it ASAP

Please post Chapter 2 soon.

I though that this was a new story...

And very well presented. However, you are very naughty leaving us hanging..... More!

What do you call that you prick teasing little bitch that's not even a quarter of the story . Brilliant so far, bring on the sequels.