All Comments on 'Mom and The School Delinquent Ch. 03'

Pretty good

Four paragraphs to the end and identification of Chad as his best friend?

Poor attempt at establishing a story line.

Next to ZERO character building.

Tense problems throughout.

Tremendous need for proof reading and/or editing.

Props for trying, your next will be better, especially if you read the comments and take the suggestions positively.

Now that you are no longer a porn writing virgin . . . Time to impress us.

Ok definitely not incest

So is this just going to be another bully/cuck son story? Or is the son going to grow a set which usually never happens.

You'll see.....

o.k enough is enough grow a set sort chad out before he gets his friends in and destroy any photos to stop any blackmail

Me gusta tus trabajos, sigue así.

8/10