by lovecraft68
Awesome story, as a stand alone or maybe a couple more chapters? Please? lol either way great job and hope to see more like this! Thanks again for your hard work!
Title pretty much says it all, there's couple of errors here and there but I'm not stupid enough to let that ruin the fun.
I hope to see more from you.
When he has a hot sexy mature woman willing to do any thing he wants.
Being a young stud he could fuck her three times a day and lick her pussy a couple times a day too, making sue his mom was well satisfied.
Thanks for the read
Had an erection from the very first. By far the best mom/son story I have ever read!
Thank you for writing and allowing us to enjoy it!
this has so much potential and many ways to go you have caught the essence of a trure mother son fuck fest keep on trucking tenbears43
Great story! It was pure, unadultered fun to read it. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the amazing work. ^__^
I'm so glad you kept nailing it in that the female was "mom" and didn't use any pronouns because I would have thought the scene jumped to a new female and the woman would have turned into someone else... It's understandable really. I used to write like this when i was in the fourth grade, so maybe when you learn fourth grade english you'll improve.
Engaging read with believable characters. I am going to read your other stories because your writing is that good. Thanks for sharing this incredible read.
Fantastic from the first word. Well written and hot as hell! I need a sequel to this story asap. I can't wait to see what these two do in the future.
Sean seemed a little too young and shy at first but by the end of this story I was completely immersed. Another brilliant story lovecraft68 and I look forward to your next taboo tale as always 😁
LC68, Thank you. A fun, satisfying tale with believable characters. Look forward to when and what you share next
Ed
This is the first story that I have read of yours. After I was have way into it I was leaking steadily. This is one totally believable and erotic story. I loved it.
In a way, the sex was so over the top that, after awhile, it stopped being arousing. Is there such a thing as too much sex?
But you are such a wonderful writer -- clean, crisp narrative and spot-on dialogue -- that this story was a pleasure to read on several levels. Well done!
That was amazing! I'm sure I speak for a lot of others when I say that I hope this story continues! Awesome job, especially with the details on how nasty she can get! More please
Another LC68 instant classic! The way you write, it's like I'm almost in the room with them. Truly awesome!
i love the way you string the story out so it feels believable. not just a wham bam
I enjoyed the story for the most part but the son was too much of a prude for me to enjoy it. She begged him and idk it kinda ruined the story for me. I understand incest isnt something easily accepted but he has a thing for bjs and he clearly find her attractive. Little to much begging for me to enojy. 4 stars though
Yes, I think you are one of the best writers mother / son of Lit!
Can you create the perfect scenery and beautiful erotic situations putting the dirty talk, lingerie, heels, sex and perversion.
Your stories hypnotize me, you can create characters that are ready to do everything, perverted sex and uncontrollable for the happiness of the person who reads, but this explosion does not happen often! :-(
Nothing gang-bang, double penetration, threesome and other strange that the characters say that they want do. You're the BEST! Free your imagination to our delight!
Ps.
I'm looking forward to the continuation of "Mom Will Do Anything!"
I concur with your analysis, light hearted and fun but also realistic. There are so many people who aren't compatible in every way, unable to satisfy all of their partners desires. Our society would be a lot better off if this were more open and we could openly develop intimate relations with others to satisfy those desires that might cause friction in our primary relationships. Whether or not the taboo aspect of incest is included. Thank you for your story
By page 4 I was so turned on I had to blow my wad.
What I found interesting is all the characters and scenarios I can relate to. Probably why I liked it so much.
Thoroughly exciting and as some of the commenters have already stated, very relatable as well. Thank you!
I very thoroughly enjoyed this story, very well written grammar, and descriptive, but above all else sexy.
I hope this gets a sequel or you write more stories like it, but either way great job, and I can't wait for more :)
This was a great story with a lot of action between mom and son, hope u do get around to a Christmas story would love to read.
my wife and I both read this treading of so we could play with each other by page 4 she had cum twice and then I came hard great story and well done hope you do more this was the best
Chapters 1-3 would just be oral, around the house with Dad in the next room, dressing his mom up in her old cheerleader outfit and taking her out on a date. Posing and taking pictures of each other, all building up to the sex. You’re right about the fun part, that’s one of the reasons Gianna Michaels is one of my favorites, not only does she have the goods but the right attitude and is always laughing while talking dirty and fucking. Please do more. I also like the honesty of the story, the Mom wants her son to keep his girlfriend but they have their own arrangement on the side.
I LOVED your story--yoou are one of the best authors on the site. Thank you! I will be reading more of your stories!
You wrote all this for that last line, didn't you? Didn't you? Because I can't think of a better way to end such an incredible story.
incredible story, keep putting storys' out like this, that was simply astounding, certainly one of the best i have read
Story caught me by suprise so many times loved every minute of it
I loved this story! The story was well written, well thought out, linear and laid everything on the table. Too often it's: hot for mother, she is too, two paragraphs in they're fooling around. You went at a lovely pace and for that kudos!
You write my favorite genre very well. On my way to read more of your stories right now. New fan here.
I loved the story i just wish you didn't end it there i mean i kinda wanted to see some ass play but other than that wonderful story.
Loved it. There is more story! Sean has to conquer her ass. Then a possible confrontation with husband/Dad. Maybe he will wake up when he realizes he. Has
competilon.
The way that he loved to eat pussy had my own cunt dripping. My juices were thick and creamy. Soon I was fingering my cunt with two fingers then spreading the viscous cunt juices all around my swollen protruding clitoris. The hot delicious cunt secretions were getting thicker and thicker until my vagina began cumming thick gobs of vaginal jizz. I licked and sucked my fingers clean. All the while thinking around his mother's delectable cunt that I would give anything to eat out. I love this story, please keep writing, I love to cum to your hot sexy writing! You do such a fantastic job of getting the hot sweet cum juices out of my cunt hole.
This story made me so horny I had to go get mom to blow me.
Very well written love the way it came together
Thanks
Building up to the moment really makes the story so much better. Now...to get some dry boxers!
This is my favorite part:
Mom stopped sucking and looking up at me, shook her head.
"What's the matter," I asked.
"I...your so hard for me!" she moaned then with a grin said, "Oh, who am I kidding?"
Very fun to read, descriptive and dirty to say the least! Great situation-leading-background and conversation script makes for a fairly realistic story. Need more stories of these sort that involves facials and swallows!
I beat my hard cock raw on this one. It was one of the hottest stories ever!!
What a hot story. Loved every minute of it. Love them older women even the taboo ones
what a story loved every page of it had me hard for hours keep up the great writing
Two people that love each other stranded by her husband and his girlfriend. A workacholic and a fridiged girlfriend. Mom and Son take care and love each other. I really enjoyed the story. I do hope there will be a follow up story about them.
Ron
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Brilliant story. The final requirement is to get it proof read before submitting it. It would make SUCH a difference and lift it from great to outstanding...
Love the story if only my wife was like this, it would be heaven
I wish they would get off of this site and go hide in a library somewhere! Digdaddyrich got it right as always, this was a great read and I loved the hell out of it! FIVE STARS!!!
This was another good read from one of my favorited authors. Maybe a little long by some standards but just the right mix of lighthearted humor and seriousness. Believabilty was on the upper end of the scale which, for me, accounts for alot. I gave it 5 stars with a big load rubbed out by the 5th page. Just a few editing errors but nothing too distracting. Good job.
This was very fun and lighthearted with a solid setup. I'm impressed by this story and will be reading more of you soon.
Thanks and 5 Stars!
Sure there's grammatical errors but I can look past that for a story like this, well written and thoroughly enjoyed every minute! I would love to see more on this, and would love to see mother and son become a couple despite what she said, perhaps not by her choice. Perhaps father decides on the divorce himself or something happens etc but either way those 2 mesh so damn well together. The 2 things that confused me is 1) she says she loves father and won't leave him... why? seriously I saw no redeeming features of his character throughout the story lol, always gone and busy, always neglecting his wife and doesn't try very hard to please her even when he "is" there. Seems like a pretty worthless husband to me besides being a good provider anyway (that's essentially all he's good for, the check, though she makes good money anyway). and 2) why she would insist he stays with Kelly. Even if she's trying to do this to help protect herself from her son getting too attached or something and endangering her relationship with father, I don't agree that she should've advised this. She KNOWS Kelly will be horrible for her son in a longterm relationship, there's just no way that will work in the long haul and his mother helping him isn't a realistic solution to the problem. She should've gave him advice on finding someone that meshed better with him if she wasn't willing to leave father for him herself. Also to people that rant about anons acting like critics etc, umm that's what the comments are for and the voting system dumbass, it also helps the authors grow when they find out what people disliked about their story. If all they hear is "great story" that's nice and sweet but does jack shit to help them grow as an author, stop being so immature. That being said there's a lot of immature anons and users that don't use constructive criticism and gives it a bad name so I can understand where you're coming from to an extent. It just bugs the hell out of me when people on here are like "if you can't say something nice, get out of here." Really? Anyways loved the story and once again would love to see more!
One of the hottest "mother fucking" tales ever!
Great job, please don't stop. You have a twisted gift.
The last sentence was brilliant! Love the humour.. Lighthearted and very well written.
I like the story and gave you four stars, which is pretty good from me. I have a picayune comments. I really wish you would learn the difference between to and too. Your primary female protagonists are all pretty much cut out of the same cloth as far as your description of them is concerned, but I do enjoy most of your work. I thank you for that.
Since I can't remember my login for this site and I hate anonymous commenters I am dukea98.
One of my favorites. This one goes into my bookmarks so I can revisit it. Great job and the guy complaining about the grammer needs to get a life.
Whooooof.. I said as I finished reading this. Awesome fantasy. Awesome. Like being there, almost.
What a lucky young man and a hot lucky mother. Damn such a good story to bad dad had reather work than take care of his smoking hot wife.
Ron
Like some of the other commenters, I could not make it through the whole story without cumming. Very believable and well written, you are on my list of favorite authors. Well done!
Nearly all your female characters are at some point reffered to as a 'pig'. And they love it! Even the dirtiest sluts in history would get offended when called a pig. I don't know about the women you know, but unless its a pet name, most women would slap the shit out of you for calling them a pig during sex. Try using a different name sometimes.
When I started reading this story it was kinda boring about Kelly, so I jumped past hearing about what a prude she was. Once I got to the mommy part my dick was hard every sentence, every chapter.. it had me leaking and wanting to be Sean.. loved this story..best I've read yet.
I'VE READ THIS NOW 3 TIME IN THE PAST COUPLE OF YEARS. GREAT STORY! I SEE THE AUTHOR HASN'T BEEN ACTIVE FOR A COUPLE YEARS OR MIGHT BE UNDER A DIFFERENT NAME. THAT'S A SHAME BECAUSE THE AUTHOR IS GOOD!
First, great story. In response to a commenter above, I actually had a gf who loved humiliation and being called ‘a pig.’ She LOVED being pissed on, too. That was more her kink than mine but I’d do it for her. Don’t think because you don’t like something then no other woman or man would like it. Open your mind.
I've read and enjoyed many of your stories. The gradual build-up and flow of your stories only serve to make them more titillating. No awkward lines and few grammatical typos... another fine story!
This was a great read! Kept me so interested, my wife was getting mad I was on my phone so much lol. I love your work and can't wait to read more it.
I really enjoyed this story, a lot. From the little details, to the twist of the son resisting, to the realistic banter between mom and son, I found the story a pleasant departure from the formula of incest stories I find.
As someone missing desire and light hearted playfulness between loved ones I hope to see more of these types of stories from you. Not necessarily a sequel, as those tend to get rediculous. More of the same feeling would be great in another story.
Good passion, nice erotica, just the right amount of kink to avoid being vanilla yet titillate the libido. Salacious. Keep it up...
One of the hottest stories I have ever read. You are very descriptive and very erotic with your words. I felt like I was in the room. Great job! Thanks for sharing your talents.
You are without a doubt, the best writer on literotica!! To put it bluntly your stories always, always, have the best build up and the best sex scenes!! You make the reader feel as if they are actually there living it!! Well written and well done!!
im going to continue reading for the sake of the comments but im greatly disappointed by how the son is acting, immature, incel and straight up beta attitude. oh mom! no! stop! gross bewbs! eww! stfu already. im about to give this kid a imaginative kick in the neck....soldiering on to page 4.
What an amazingly hot, steamy, sexy and seductive story.
Was disappointed to finish it as I was enjoying it so much.
Totally needs a seque, it demand a sequell!!
Just as you have us used to, your last sentece is amazing, same as the rest of the story. 5+
Your writing is excellent. Every story I have read (so far 5), is unique. This story was simply fun to read. To me, it was candy. I experienced no emotional swings or attachments with any character in this story. A little candy is okay once in a while but I would not want it every day.
I had as much fun reading it as you did writing it LC68! Let me know when you write another one wc804568@google.com Thanks Bill
Loved it. Excellent piece of writing and unbelievable about what cold easily be a real situation. Will be reading more of your offerings.
What a great mother. A model mom to everyone. Mothers everywhere should aspire to this level of love for their sons.great fucking story. More please!!!!!!
Fuck!!! One of the best stories
Bro I love your stories specially “mom will do anything 2” and now this
Keep it up 👍
P.s: we need “mom will do anything part3”
Damn what a story. I want to hear the next part when he takes her asd. Toolkit job man!!!!!
5⭐️ story and this needs at least another chapter in this story,, another round with mom the next morning,, taking mom in the ass and more
Now this is more what I'm used to reading from you it definitely needs a second part