All Comments on 'Mom on the Boat'

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Sex4lf57Sex4lf57almost 3 years ago

Very fucking hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

Omart57Omart57almost 3 years ago

Sexy and Hott! Great story my friend!

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcalmost 3 years ago

Good story! Would have liked to know what happened to his father, but still good. 5*

walt555walt555almost 3 years ago

I'd have gone 5 stars for more content

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

All 3 in one bed. Jesse needd ty o work on a baby bump.

sp9983sp9983almost 3 years ago

He should have fucked his mother as well.

zooliciouszooliciousalmost 3 years ago

LIke my lake boat, this story takes off and is a great ride. Well done.

madtaffcatmadtaffcatalmost 3 years ago

Fabulously frisky frolicking! Keep up the VERY good work....

bucco40bucco40almost 3 years ago

Hope you write more chapters to this story. An exploration of sorts for the whole family. Maybe some of Jesse's family will get involved too.

oldsage_1oldsage_1almost 3 years ago

Great story! This would be a good one for a chapter 2. We just met the characters and have to say good bye, Shame, they seem like such fun folks. Would be nice to get to know them better! 😉

Cheers

SAGE

KlitomaticKlitomaticalmost 3 years ago

Too rushed, slow down, you got talent son. And lots of possibilities to display it on.

ekim22ekim22almost 3 years ago

I agree with Klitomatic, too rushed....you write fine, just slow the story down.

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