by Stormbringer
Great story as always.
I'm just disappointed we didn't get to see some mother/daughter action but I understand it's not your thing.
Was hoping for another chapter or Frank getting revenge by blowing up the house and transferring his funds.
Very much enjoyed the story except for the ending.
Maybe not he still has a day before they return
Really enjoyed the original story, but this expanded version manages to improve on it. Good work.
This is a wonderful expansion of your great original, Storm! As always the details are so well done and your humor just adds on an extra layer (loved the ending!).
Amazing story. Hope there’s an in depth story about what mother and daughter did for only fans.
Fun ending! Great refresh of the original story, you've improved it 👍 Keep up the excellent work 👌
Personal request to continue "Try This On For Size" 🙏 I liked the first Installment. Has potential 🧐🤓
the ending is just... WTF. Its rushed and sloppy, completely ruins the story, almost like it was written by someone else
Great to read you again Stormbringer. Thanks for sharing this one here cause unable to access your site.
Yeah pretty sure that ends in some terrible violence. Just sad all the racist tropes in these stories. They only serve to prey on prejudices and insecurities about perceived illusions of black penis that are laughably wrong based on simple statistical evidence. Thankfully the world operates (mostly) on the Scientific Method and not the banalities or racism and cuckoldry. Sigh.
Yeah, pretty sure:
It doesn’t “end in terrible violence (because it’s a fictional story);
These commentators are not concerned about racism (because they are reading a 10 page interracial story on an erotica site); and
The scientific method doesn’t want to touch this taboo with a 12 inch cock.
Face it- you read and you came. Is you feel guilty. It’s not the author’s fault.
Just more black thug racist trash. Doesn't matter how you spin it, it's just stupid and ugly.