All Comments on 'Mom Pounded While Daughter Grounded'

Really like the exaggerated art. “Big Nig” is racist but funny.

This was good would love to see how this develops

The story is cute and sexy

But Big Nig Is offensive - you get a 1

Great short story. 5 stars

This is an old story of mine and the illustrations were done by The Pit back when he was still an artist on johnpersons.com. He now has his own patreon for his art. The pictures were posted here with permission of Johnpersons.com. Most of you are probably aware that Pit is also the creator of Kitty and Jenny Summers in my Coxville Curse stories. His Coxville art can be found on Johnpersons and his patreon.

Who does you’re illustrations they’re so fucking hot!

Or Michelle dominates her former Mom aka Megan by making her a full fledged slut for BBC by making Herbert all the sex from Big Nig until she gets totally impregnated by Nig and gets kicked out of the house by Dad.

oh my, Stormbringer, the story makes me wanna beg for Nigel, using the name he prefers. Exciting!!

I know the story is old and you don't do incest but a second chapter in which Big Nil fucks Megan and Michelle together would be epic.

Would love to see the sequel where Nig pops both of Michelle's cherry's and gets together her and her mother together. I'm sure you can think of great and many situations for them. Cuckolding hubby, friends joining in, etc. I'll be hard waiting for the sequels.

Mom turns into slut in one night with a disease ridden drug thug.

Loved the story. Time for a sequel?

Stormbringer + The Pit = Erotica Classic.

This story will never get old. So fucking hot.

The story just states "Illustrated"

It should read RAPE.....Inter racial......

Many of us DON'T LIKE RAPE....regardless of whether you claim "fiction" or not.

How about that "retirement" that you suggested? I vote for that.

THIS WAS CLEARLY A RAPE AND ALSO RACEST. THE MOM WAS DRUGGED, I DON'T LIKE RAPE AND RACEST STORIES, SO YOU EARNED ONE STAR.

Lma big nig isnt racist, its funny

Yikes. I get it's fiction but you have to understand that this crosses a couple of lines not even for the benefit of the story. It's just super edgy. It's nowhere near hot enough of a base story for this kind of shit.

a second part with mother impregnation is needed!

Part 2 please

Next story should be a three way with the daughter. With the mom going down on her own daughter

Naming your main character “Big Nig”. Saying “He was dressed in black and his dark black skin blended into the darkness. Provided he didn't smile, she wouldn't see him”. This is all racist as hell.

I loved the pic where that huge black cock takes that white MILF ass. Her struggle is real, but she takes it up her ass good. More please!

The father should blowout his kneecaps and cut off his cock...

You’re story has been reported and is continuing to be reported on the grounds of racism, prejudice and plain stupidity. This is very stereotypical for both races and it displays your irrational notions. Do better.

So what? She is now a nigger whore! If that is the desirable goal of white wives, then go for it. The idiots don't die out and mostly find themselves in the gutter!

Really enjoyed the story and eventual fall to black cock. Would like a longer description of the licking and fucking. I don't think you needed the drugs in her drink - she was hooked from the first thrust..

SexyRedhead

Stop crying, it's just a story, lol.

AMAZINGLY HOT! A 5++. The illustrations were cartoonish but were highly erotic. Thank you, Stormbringer AND The Pit. I'd love to see more of your joint efforts. (No pun intended)

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I'd take that big black cock inside me anytime he wanted. And let him cum inside me whenever he wanted. I'd swallow his huge load. AND I'm white

Good story I wonder how many white women have this fantasy

you got anymore like this one

I love this. Is there a part 2?

A great story, with some interesting twists.

OMFG YES I so want to be owned by black men and be there whore. Love to let them take pics and video of me being there married white cum whore and help them blackmail my family into being there owned white slaves to use. omg i need to cum.

Very horny!

It's time to ban such phrases as Big Nig.

Great story ,should be real life , dont listen brainless nerds, he should have fucked her longer and filled few more times with his seed second time not pull of her pussy and fill up with his impregnating her ,

all white women getting blacked need to get load their throats ass filled and impregnated as a reward,

The Storyline fits the Illustrations perfectly !

Great illustrations. Better than the story, but that's pretty hot also.

Typical anglophobic American stupidity within the story. Seriously give up writing!

Just felt compelled to read the story and enjoy every bit of it. What a way of satisfying the sexy hungry mom.

Seriously, the degree of racist innuendo is demonstrative of your orientation.

Look at the last picture. She is smiling at him so eagerly. She is probably pregnant already. Please give us an update on how this works out

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My bi white guy would love to have this storie happen to me and save my daughter so to speak I’m so hard I’m in South Carolina if big cock wants to use me

I like it but needs more and lots of it.

crude, filled with racist stereotypes

Bigoted AF.

Another LIT author who does not know JillShit about women’s reproductive system. in MF intercourse, no matter how shallow the vagina nor how long the penis, the penis cannot go through the (vaginal*) cervix and invade the uterus (womb.) The cervix is NOT in-line on the ‘wall’ at the end of the vagina. It IS very near the end of the vagina BUT it is on the ‘roof’ of the vaginal tube. Again, the angle between the vagina and the uterus is close to a 90 degree (right.). The cervical tissue is not very flexible except under hormonal control (menstruation, birthing.) Next, there is a viscous mucus plug which keeps the uterus from getting infected via the vagina. Finally, an erect pecker is not prone to make sharp turns.

Incidentally, the human female cervix, during a real orgasm, repeatedly dips down into the semen pool on the ‘floor’ of the vagina. So if Sweetie is faking the Big O with Hubby and her Bull gets lucky a few hours later, guess which one wins the Ovum Sprint.

The tendency to exaggerate is evident also in the illustrations, but that is tobe expected, whereas misleading We-The-Readers on basic Biology is unfortunate.

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So where is part 2 when he shows up every night for almost a week and she welcomes him and they screw all night.

Then part 3 where he tells her to make sure it's her daughter in that bed the next night, because he has a surprise for hee. But her mom decides to surprise him and they both are in the bed waiting for him. But his surprise was he was bringing 2 friends and he wanted to gangbang her daughter, but now it's 3 on 2 and they get dp'ed and stuffed tighter than a turkey on Thanksgiving.

Would love to read those 2 new parts. :)

Big Nig LOL pretty good story.

Wow what a wonderful story. I have read it many times and every time I read it I get hot. I want to rewrite this story in Pakistani and Indian background. I hope the author of this story will allow me to do so. (Note: My English is not very good but I try my best to write something good)

Megan's tits were really, too big and out of proportion, but her tight pussy, took his 12", and his over flowing cum load, wish it was my ass getting big cum load, he could cum in me all night, with it dripping like a faucet, I'm bisexual, he could of fucked me all night long, fuck my husband's little white cock!

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Just checking back, again, to see if the 'penny dropped' for readers yet about The Big Nig'

...hilariously, not

Excellent story and conversation-starter, both ***** and a favourite point