All Comments on '"Mom-Son": A Love Story'

this is a really hot story loved it

Incest Island is a good choice....

I have read most of your works on this site. Just want to say I'm a big fan. This story needs another chapter at the very least so you can show the island and the first time her and Kennedy meet

Yes I want to hear more about all of your suggestions!!!

Fucking smoking hot story!! The story does not end fine as it is. At the very least it should be continued with a threesome with the best friend. Would also like to read about the trip to the incest resort island.

Loved this story. Can not wait to see how the relationship develops especially with a trip to Walden Island with Kennedy and son

A great story so far. Please continue it! Chapters 2, 3, etc.

cant wait to see rest of story

Let's hear the whole story in all its facets. Captivating! Thanks!

I'd love to see stories about all of your suggestions, and maybe have Paul join Courtney and Laurie after their tryst.

This story is way beyond 5*

Thank you for sharing

Love the story with all of the great lead up and factual info. Plus the change of styles and real world applications. Great sex build up and I want ALL of the chapters to come alive for all of us, as your writing does that for your readers. Wonderful Job!

anal should come next along with all of the other scenarios. great story

I am a lover of anal but STARBLACK is wrong, anal does not need to come next. There is so much more that could and should happen before the ultimate submission of your virgin ass. This is a story line of slow and well paced submission that should unfold over several chapters. *****

Silk

You are the author, you created this and you should decide where to take it. If I had a wish, I would want to know if Courtney does in fact want to be Paul's slut mommy or if they are going to be 'equal'. As to the neighbor and the island, I think that the two of them should have at least a half chapter if not a full chapter to define themselves. I do not always associate incest with group or swing sex, so I leave that to you. You are a fabulous writer with erotic ideas that are off the charts. So while I have my own fantasy of this story, it is your fantasy that started it and your fantasy that should continue it. Regardless I will wait with breathless anticipation for whatever you put forth, knowing your capability it will also rate the Five star rating this one received - Kevin

I can see this going a long way yet. Going to the island and the two gals getting together and the two sons fucking the others mother and the two sons getting together also.

I can certainly see Mrs. Bell playing a major role.

Good start (or finish)... I'll have to agree with "Anon"... take them to the island... let them watch... let them swap... then twist it 'bi' and let your imagination run.

yes more chapters

Please more I became so horny

in these responses that I would rule out, BUT in all historic and realistic stories of Mother/Son incest the real kicker lies in the Son's insemination of his Mother. And when those authors carried on the stories in much of classical literature, they pursued the plots of incest among siblings resulting from the incest. Thank you for a very interesting story, and like other comments, I look forward to additions to this one.

Of course we want more! :) Maybe mom even becomes somewhat submissive like her online friend?

Great writing and build up to the action.

Gawd yes more more and still more. Such A hot story there has to be more

Courtney's deeply attracted to her tall good-looking 18 year old boy Paul. She loves everything about him, especially what the boy's got jumping around in his pants. But the poor mother's conflicted. She feels pangs of guilt when she thinks these really dirty thoughts about her own son, yet whenever she does, her cunt leaks like a faucet. What to do, what to do. Luckily she meets another mother in cyberspace who's been getting banged till she walks funny by her own boy Jimmy. The lady enlightens Courtney, and the deal is sealed when Jimmy writes: "seduce your son and u will have a live in cock available at all times." Her own son Paul's big hard cock--for her, the Staff of Life. Jimmy instills confidence. "I know 4 sure ur son wants to bang u." How? "because I'm a son and I have never met a guy who hasn't thought about it, fantasized about it and obsessed over it." Jimmy's wise beyond his years, and Courtney sets out to collect her prey. When Paul turns up after his shower in only a small towel, his mom spots something jutting out that inflames her. Tearing away the cloth reveals her boy's fat 8-incher in all its glory, rock hard and reaching for he sky. Paul puts up a token resistance, but, hey, his mom wants and needs his big stiff cock, and what son can ever resist that? The boy slides his cock up between his mother's legs, up his own damn birth canal, into the same wonderful hole he came out of 18 years before. He's tingling all over his young body, with his cock enveloped by layers of warm wet loving mommy-twat. Now Paul realizes what his cock is for, as he fucks his own mother with all his youthful energy and strength and mom cums convulsively, again and again. I love that when Courtney asks him where he wants to cum, he doesn't say her tits or ass--he blows his hot young balls right up his mother's ever-loving twat, the twat of all his boyish dreams. Sorry for the great length, but it shows how much I value this brilliant story. Would've been 50 stars if possible. Oh, the survey: don't care for any lesbian or anal action here, much much more about Paul and Courtney, how they move away and get married, and how he fucks a baby, lots of cute little incest-kids, right up where he was once a baby.

Yes we want more of Mommy and Son with all that you mentioned above also.!

Just wish my Mother had brought this up to me as we could have had a very special relationship and been a lot happier.**

Thanks for letting me know that my Mother and I could of had it all.^^

You got a cool "5" and I just wish voting went to 100."

TYVM

Would definitely like to read about more of their amorous adventures and relationships.Very well written....

I love how your character relates to others with similar sentiments. Very erotic. I will add to favorites!

Wow. I loved this story. The stories-within-a-story angle made for so many great moments. I am going to have to work my way through your library until you contue this story. I would love to read what happens at incest island. Will there me mommy swapping?

I enjoyed the interaction of all the characters in this story. 5 of 5. Would LOVE to see this continue as you see fit. I had a couple fingers in me almost the whole time. Exploded with them both.

You're the best at this genre. Hope to read soon of Mommy screaming thru orgasm from anal sex

yawn!

the story should continue, except for the lesbian stuff. maybe a swap would be cool as well.

You do an excellent job creating your stories, so whichever avenue you wish to follow I will happily read. Thank you

Three cheers and more for your great story. I tried to imagine Paul with a bit of blond chest hair to give Courtney a real thrill! Write more please!

Loved the story and definitely looking forward to more of their journey.

You are a master at this genre of writing Miss. I sure hope to read about all the future adventures of Paul and Courtney.....

Wonderful Story and definitely needs another 4 or 5 chapters as described above, maybe even a 3-some with Laurie!! This is another in a long lne of fantastic stories from You!!

I want to cook a juicy steak on your ass.

Loved this from beginning to end. It is very well crafted, written and edited. 'Mom-Son: A Love Story' begs for a series as only you can provide. Topics you mentioned offer really titillating and sexually appealing possibilities. Visiting Walden with Kennedy and Jimmy seem to offer a variety of alluring combinations including anal, incest,lesbian and group sex. Please do bring us more. You have an incredibly provocative touch.

Great story. Strangely enough, I want to hear about Paul fucking Mrs. Bell!

Absolutely! I'd love to hear more about Paul and Courtney's incestuous journey. And I'd really like to hear the adventure at Walden Island, a nice mother-swap would be fun, as well as a lesbian experience with Kennedy. Not to sure about an adventure with Laurie, though. Unless Laurie has a son that they could hook her up with, a relationship with Laurie could be pretty compromising for Paul and Courtney. They would seem more like competitors for Paul's attention. Of course, that might be interesting too.

Great

You fucking bounce around from story to story~ You fucked this story, I was incredibly annoyed by page 2 on the lame ass seduction techniques used by her!

Yet another fabulous tale from my favorite author, please continue with all four options

Want to read about all of the above.

Great story. Hot!! Can't wait for the sequel

Definitely needs the follow-up chapters, a great read and a moving one as well. Thank you for your time and talent.

If its a love story you cannt have them fucking the other mom and son.if you love your mom,you would not want to see her fucking the other son.you may be can have the moms do somethings,but can it be love story if mom is a slut?

I want the story to continue. Lets have all your questions answered in the positive. I kept imagining the full experience as the story went along.

I hope this story is a winner.

I'm honestly open to wherever you take it from here. I'm not a big fan of swapping and sharing though. So i'd prefer, if you didn't turn it into a Mother-Son foursome :/

I loved it. This mother in nylons and the stocking foot action is very exciting. I really want to read a follow up, no matter what direction you take. I'm very interested in how you will deal with an incest island retreat and I would enjoy reading about mother - son swapping.

How about a triple with the mother & son plus the friend; and throw in some dildo sucking plus dildo fucking with both getting their asses & pussies reamed with dildos and son's dick...and then a intense 69 for the two women while Mom is getting her ass deep stroked by son with a BIG vibrating dildo going full blast in her pussy?!

I really enjoyed this story I like the fact it didn't have a lot of domination it flowed really well and I loved the nylon foot action! A great turn on. The slow build up was great and her noticing his nylon attraction was really good for me.

I would love to see her with Mrs Bell and then with Kennedy! Great story so far, well told!

You are the tops in erotica writing, love to see your stories. Anything you write to continue this adventure wil be awesome! Mark

MORE PLEASE!

More and more please, I came the whole time reading this story, so more please

I loved the story and yes please continue it. I agree with PantyLvr I too would like to hear more about Paul's and Mrs Bell's affair. Now please excuse me while I get nit-picky, Abraham and Sara were half brother and sister, same father different mothers. You are right, the human race began with incest, all of Adams and Eves sons married ether a sister or niece. After the flood the only option for wives for Noah's grandsons was ether a sister or a cousin. Marrying a near kinsman was probably common practice until God forbade it in the Mosaic law. After which it began to tapper off but has never ended. Interesting tidbit, the Mosaic law does not forbid first cousins from marrying.

more please

i must read much much more please

Don't you dare leave us hanging! Yes, I want to read about all of their adventures! This is another great story and hopefully the beginning of another wonderful series.

man you are my favorite writer I really want to read more of this story and thanks to you I have started to seduce my mom after reading your stories an it seems to have start working ..........thank you.....and I will be waiting for your next story

I would so love for you to combined 3 of your options together. Have them go to the island and meet up with Kennedy for her first lesbian experience them have another first with her son taking her anal cherry.

I so love your stories. I search for you in each of these contests. You truly have a gift.

That story got me so worked worked up I hope there's at least three continuations please!!!!!

Yes please. All the above options and more. You are by far my favorite author, I love your Mother and Son Incest Stories. I love when 'Mom' becomes a Mommy Slut; either with just her son or knowingly or unknowingly to his friends with them also. Moms need to FUCK, and often. Please keep writing.

I hope you continue on with the other parts of the questions. Great story!!

Once again a beautiful story, to help with this one have got my son here too who has just given me another wonderful fucking, I may be old, (68), but still enjoy to feel my son (52) inside me and to his cumming. I too would like to read about the coming stories, as they will be just as juicy.

I love this story, so please continue. Mayby put a twist in it with a daughter who becomes addicted to her brother too.

please i'll look now to see if there is more, i want to hear about the lesbian sex too.

I love this story. It made me so wet. I wish my mom had a son of her own....but alas, she has only a daughter....me. I love you Jasmine.

Kristina (with Madge)

Let me think... Yes please! I liked the build-up and would look forward to seeing more chapters of their journey.

Another fantastic story, words can't describe amazing work u do you have a gift in writing so please keep up the good work. wud luv to read more of your stories.

... But this story is very hot, maybe it's just your intense style of writing. Would love to see more chapters.

That story was amazing! I would love to see more chapters. I really wanna see you put out a chapter on losing her anal cherry and the vacation. Thanks for the great story and I hope you make more chapters!

So hot! Please do a chapter for all options.

I have read several of your stories and hope you continue this one. Will he take control, will she submit? Inquiring minds want to know.

I definitely want to see more. Though I am most definitely not appreciative of dominance/submission. It is so easily and so often abused. I just don't understand one's need to dominate and humiliate another. Mom and Son here as lovers is definitely hotter than the internet couple with son referring to mom as 'mommy-slut'. My mother/wife and I have been together for thirty years. She was 35 when we got together so she is sixty-five today. She was 17 when she had me, so she was still a young mother when I turned 18. We've had three kids now. Two live as sister/wife and brother/husband, and our youngest married his cousin who is five years his senior. My wife still likes for me to call her 'mommy' when its just us at home as now it almost always is. I love this story, and I hope you add to it without bdsm or dom/sub. That is the only trouble with your work. You have a 'thing' for dom/sub, which to me means 'evil/weak' and ruins good stories for me. Keep up this as a series.

No other chapters, please. The story is good as it is. I noticed, you have a bad habit for ruining a good thing by dragging your MC's through usual kink routine. If you truly believe this story is unfinished, then finish it. Otherwise, it's already finished.

Getting inside her head and listening to her thinking of how to make it work

for her !!!!! It was a real treat, confirming that all, she went through was

really, a final decision to let Lust and Love come true, for them both !!!

Thank you, again !!!

I love it so far. I want him and her to take all their options! Tell me more! I'm a real sucker for a good sexy love story! Bi just makes it better as long as Paul and Courtney are true lovers and everyone else are mutually enjoyed "fun".

This story was so well written that it oozed sensuality. To say it was erotic is putting it mildly. This is one of those stories that can either stand alone just fine or become a series quite easily providing you handle the plot and characters like you did in this story. Although as a teenager I never looked at my mother in a incestuous way, all the guys that saw my mother who was 20 years older than myself told me how beautiful and hot she was. Most of their mothers were in their late 40's or early 50's while my mother was in her late 30's. It was not until I started reading the incest stories that I realized that I had missed a golden opportunity to have an incestuous relationship with my mother. I would advise any teenager who is 18 years old or any guy that is in his 20's or 30's to try his best to seduce his mother into becoming his lover not for just a day or a week but for life if at all possible. I know my mother was not just a hot woman but also highly independent, highly intelligent and creative plus full of class including being a true lady all the things a man truly desires in a lover and spouse. Mother taught me how to be independent, nurtured my creativity, to respect women as individuals and as equals, instilled in me a strong work ethics which is sadly lacking in today's society and that commitments are to be honored. She taught me that marriage was one of those commitments that should be worked at insure it's survival unless the other partner is an adulterer. Unfortunately I did not realize until way too late after one divorce and one other broken relationship that the person I was seeking as a mate and lover was someone not just like my mother but rather was my Mother.

I agree with the Goody person. I consider BDSM, Dom/submissie to be real perversions and in no way erotic. in a real mom son love affair what they would be wrestling with among much else, would be having a child or not, how to protect themselves from prosecution etc.

I would love to see an author with a love story like this one explore these concerns and come up with decent narrative, practical solutions..especially the having a baby issue... dealing with risk that wont ever go away.

Hi ! You have done a work of art. I think you should take the story further EXACTLY where you want it to go.

Your readership has opinions that may bend you a bit, but deep down your creative strides will see it through.

Thanks Don

Amazing. Yes, more. This is great. The story has sooooo many juicy possibilities, it would be shame to stop now.

The transcriptions of the long emails was unnecessary. Should have been summarized in a few short sentences. Also the defending of incest in italics isn't needed. You're preaching to the choir here.

I was favorably impressed. Well written and certainly worth another chapter.

More, More, More!!!! What an awesome story!!! I want more to jack off to!!!

Your command of words, thoughts, situations, and caring is uncanny. I love literally every one of your pieces. you are a credit to literature of the highest quality and sensuously exciting.

Without understating your story, it raptured my intense devotion. Son and mother deeped fantasies of mother-fucking for me. Continue please!

Yes I want more, I want to know if they went to the island & if they did what happened. You had me hooked from the start

More please!!!

this story is awesome as is but i'd love to read all of those sequels ;)

More anal

I would definitely love to read further sequels. Its really interesting to follow what next.

Makes me wonder if my mom want to fuck me

I vote for all your suggestions.

Great writing, I am slowly working my way through your list of stories

Make more stories plz

I loved it it's a good story text me a story before you post so I can tell you if it's good or not 19033378941

If only there was a site with professional incest videos like it mentioned in the story.

You write very well, and tis story cries out for more chapters.

Finesh the story