All Comments on 'Wonderland Ch. 01'

hurry with more chapters - this has the making of a very long and excellent story

Good start... good foundation for follow-on chapters.

Looking forward to your dreams coming true.

Great read, with a solid plot.

Hope to read more!

I can't wait to hear about you visiting your grandparents and.........

please make the son's dream come true! "join us?"

Uh, this IS part 2. The asshole doesn't know how to use chapter numbers. The first part was "Mom Through the Looking Glass". Not hard to find out, but it is NOT the job of the reader to have to figure it out. It IS the job of the writer to provide that information.

All the chapters have titles from Alice in Wonderland or variations on that.

Not bad but we need more, Cunt lapper Lanc's uk

I thoroughly enjoy mutually consensual incestuous love stories. In this chapter, I only see a son who has no respect for his parents nor their privacy. He has no rerspect for himself. He has no conscious, no moral code bor shame.

Foxterot - jeez, man, if the writer of a stroke story can't include a peeping tom, what the hell can he include? Lighten up - his bad manners are sure to be forgiven in the near future.