All Comments on 'Mom, You'll Beg for My Cock'

Great story, well written, I would most definitely read another chapter. Good job.

I would love to read more.

please keep on writing

good story , well written , would love to read where they go from here , more no holes bared sex

You're one of the best at the build up. Great story and yes I want more but please make it a lasting relationship. A great love story. I really enjoyed the way you can change the POV and the story doesn't get messy. Waiting for part 2.

glad to see you publishing again. well written. 5 stars. Hopefully you'll write a few more chapters of "A Twins Desire" - maybe even finish it - before you add more here. This is a very good story - twins desire is even better.

write more he impregnates her doesnt he?after cumming in her she wants his baby.

Add no one else.. no friends no one.. let his sister be unaware, but ultimately find out.. Chance knocks up his mother and his sister reluctantly accept the relationship of her mom and bro.. but please do not ruin it bringing others into it.. just have them two going on more dates, maybe sneak around at hotels sometimes until the daughter figures it out.. add nylons and heels on mom.. if I add right and chance is 19.. that means mom's 34.. so you enough to bare more kids ..

I found myself getting into the story and want more my question is did she get impregnated

Good story! More please. Eventually you should have little sister catch them, and keep the secret until she can't stand not joining in.

The master story teller will have to watch his back. Your good, nice read.... THANKS

Your story was absolutely amazing so erotic I was aroused the entire time. I hope you post more. I'm going to checkout your other stories

One of the best developed Mom and Son incest story in Literotica - But please do not make this a threesome of "Mother, Daughter and Son" sex.he dialogue between mother and son was great - basically a mother loving and needing her son and son loving and needing his mommie. Adding sister would seem to turn the stry away from pure love between mother and son and turn oit into just another fuck story.

Not only was your story hot, but it was beautiful as well. I loved it!

Fantastic loved it, needs more, can't wait to read it,,,love a mommy like that

Really enjoyed the story. Would like to read another chapter. Hope there's more coming. I also would like to make a request. If u can write a story about mom seducing her sons friend or the son catching mom fucking his friend. Thanks. Keep up the great work.

I really enjoyed it.

Great story, liked how it developed and therefore, would definitely like to read more chapters. Illustrating how they form a hot sexual bond together and more interesting, how they bring sister into their love affair. More chapters definitely in order

Great start but you need to keep going. It at least needs a decent ending not just left 'In the air',

Please keep it going

we know the sister is going to come in sooner or later after all she is coming home so maybe have her show up early and catch mother and son and work from there her trying to get that through her head as well as lusting for her mother and brother

Hot as Hell! The way they teased each other only increased the Heat. Five Stars! Do hope you keep it going. Is sister coming home soon?

Would love to read second part but not if they stop for some bullshit reason like age or finding his own happiness or shit.

Write from mothers view or sons view...

I would like to see the relationship continue to grow. The potential conflict of putting their relationship on hold while his sister is there.

I would like to see where the story continues, just hope they don't stop.

Keep it going cause I want more of this sexy story...well done!

After 100k views, this story was reported and removed. The flashback memory for mom described underage sex. For me, that scene created the passion for the rest of the story. I reworked it - many times - and kept having it rejected. When a story is rejected, very little feedback is given. After the last rejection, I re-submitted it as-is with a note saying all underage sex had been removed. It was then approved. I wonder if I would have done that in the 1st or 2nd revision ... ?

Anyway, it's back. Most of the underage sex scene was changed to a memory of mom's memory of a night in a hotel a little before the untimely passing of dad. I hope it still works. All feedback is welcome.

I dont recognise your name but I am not all that current. I DO recognise excellent writing. Its a great surprise.

Loved the characters, my idea of what to expect wasn't firm in 3 lines as so many are.

Great work

Thank you.

They stay together , have one child and raise it together. May have to relocater. Maybe sister joins her mother.

May I compliment you on your excellent work. The he story is beautifully prepared, you have made use of the English language in the manner that this tale has been crafted, you have provided great characterisation and excellent descriptive text.

Leave this as a single entity and leave us your readers to use our imaginations if we wish the story to progress.

It was a great story until the last line. How could you leave it to hang with that question, then ask your readers if there should be another chapter? HELL YES!

Absolutely one of my favorites!

Nope🙄 the final pages turned he anticipation dull. Sorry, I'll skip the continuation🤦

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