All Comments on 'Mom, You're Naked!'

He got to her just in time,and oh!! boy what did he see.Read it and find out ................... Good read THANKS

What makes an incest story hot is the long slow build up that pushes the family members over the uncrossable line. Even though the son walked in on his mother bound and totally naked, you still slow-played the dialogue and action with the skill and precision of a surgeon, letting it simmer to a rolling boil.

“The orgasm shook her to the core, touching something deep inside her, something Chuck had never touched. Lara couldn't name it. But it didn't need to be named. It enveloped her with overwhelming force, and she surrendered to it, utterly.”

She didn’t need to name it, but we all know exactly what you meant.

Very well written and extremely erotic. 5 Stars is hardly enough!

Very nicely done. Loved the tease.

I wish Connor suckled whall slurpping to drink mouthfulls of his sweet and sweaty mother's cunt , swallowing his own mother's cum gushing goodness . For the flavor . Bravo!!!

Very well written! Excellent slow build-up and a nice ending. No need to lengthen the story and to compromise its quality.

This was a well written piece. Great pace, descriptive but not crude, and I like the way you maintained the POV. Lots of good stuff in here. Well done

The image of her waxed pussy humping and flowing is what did it for me (read that part twice and couldn’t hold back). Her attempts to curb his swear and the flow of evidence running down her leg was too much for me. The funny thing is my mother called me right before that part (I didn’t answer), but it may have triggered me. After cleaning up and calling my mom back I did finish the story. I loved the story (5 star) but I would have had him produce the key as his cock was positioned to enter her - so she could beg for it anyway. Also I love oral sex and which he would have gotten his face wet and used the Key in the end so she could drop to her knees for his finish.

Very True Side Note (if interested):

I do know what her pussy used to look like (so moms call did have significance for me). Many years ago she had gotten remarried for short time, the guy had a collection of porn video tapes and I kept getting caught (by her) Stoking it while watching the movie Taboo (once knowing she’d catch me while I was cumming). I’m well endowed, was aroused and wanted to show her my cock (shrug). As a teacher she was home a lot in the summer when I was home from college (when my stepdad worked). She started taking mid afternoon naps and letting me know when I’d have time to myself if I wanted to “watch anything”. So there were several weeks that we ended up watched each other masturbate. Most says we each did it alone but two different time when I went to look in on her I caught her coming out to look in on me. I watch her cum 4 times that summer (once sitting on the floor of her room with a dildo in her mouth) and I k ow she watched me several times (I used to get off when the mom woke the son by sucking him in the movie). That was 25 years ago and over the years I’ve made several flirtatious/flattering comments about ”that time the urges were strong” and we both seem comfortable about wanting something to have really happen but somehow happy to connect mentally on a sexual level without ever really speaking of it directly. Now she 75 and overly religious, but I can still make comments that make her blush and she isn’t above making complimentary comments about my size and build - relating to non sexual situations (so it can only be understood by she and me). 🙂

I fucking loved it. Such a good plot. Glad she got rid of the boyfriend, who needs him when she has someone even better. I came whilst reading, Definitely my favourites.

Lara's got two assholes to deal with Chuck and Connor.

1) NO One's arms and hands should be suspended above their waists for more than 15 to 20 minutes, EVER, and NEVER LEFT ALONE!

2) Her son was acting like an uneducated 4 year old, not as she described.

3) Her son was extremely selfish.

4) If he cared for his mom, he would have covered her with towels or a sheet while he got a sharp knife from the KITCHEN, and cut the cuffs and ropes and released her.

5) HE RAPED HIS MOTHER.

Both her "son" and the "boyfriend" should have been arrested and castrated!

I wish you would write more and logner stories. Heck I wish this story has sequel and longer!

That was fun; I enjoyed it.

Thanks

M

Legs do not bend like that.

Whilst suspension of a body in the manner suggested could be extremely detremental to the person suspended, the story was enjoyable and entertaining.

Smoking Hot!

The asshole at ASSTR, https://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/ken, is stealing stories from here again. The shit head ever posted "Author: Ken riley"

https://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/ken/Mom%20You%27re%20Naked.txt. (The spaces become %20 and the ' becomes %27.)

a real good read i like the story and i would like to read more of there times to gather

That was toooo hot! I would love another chapter. Good writing. Great fantasy:-)

I'm with racfguy and Anonymus "As a physician..." I just might add that it's highly illogical for mother and son to have solely concentrated on the cuffs. First thing, which even wouldn't hinder the author to proceed with the events regardless, would be to untie the rope around her thigh, or just cut it. I dare anybody to stand that way for an hour and longer, it'd be torturous. Lesson to be learned: Even if you like to play like that and are a submissive slut like the mother in this story: Don't do something like that with anybody unless you can completely trust them and agree on a safe word.

Also, why does she tell her son she ended up willingly in the situation he found her in? She had demanded to be set free before her boyfriend left, didn't she? And she had mused about getting back at him- so why not telling the truth up front? Well, I guess the mother's submissiveness is on par with her stupidity, The son is an even bigger asshole than her boyfriend. I just don't want to read about people like this and would be much happier just now if the author had placed it in BDSM or nonconsent/reluctance.

Well earned 5 stars

Well earned 5 stars

Keep writing it was great 5 stars

Hawt, Hawt, Hawt!

11/10 Leather Handcuffs!!!!!

Loved the first two sites of the story. Very hot.

Him fucking her was too much and ruined the story for me.

Could have been the beginning of something better.

The first natural reaction would have been to throw a blanket over his mother. Then, when he couldn't find the key straight away, and he was getting turned on by her helplessness, he could slowly pull the blanket back off.

This is basically a rape story, despite the Mom needing very little convincing to submit to her son. As such, it should have been listed under reluctance, non-consent. Still, I'm not complaining. The story was h-o-t! Especially that explosive, gushing, orgasm, she experienced.

Should it have been followed by her tears, before ending with mad lovemaking between mother and son? Maybe. Of course, I didn't write it, so there you go.

It had it's flaws. As others have pointed out, the way she was bound up would have been agony in a very short period of time. And I dont think the son's reactions were totally believable.

Still, as far as it goes, being a fantasy and all, I gave it Five Stars!

There's a porn like this. MIssX India Summer. Hot stuff.

5 stars but a knife would have done better. Amusing

Come on Connor lets go take a shower and go to bed together for some fucking. To bad there never was a second chapter, the story could have been fun..

This is just a rape story with a very dangerous bondage as described. Even if BDSM is your kink, please learn anatomically safer ways of doing it. Also, never really leave anyone alone like that.

I kept thinking of the Stephen King story “Gerald’s Game” The movie with Carla Gugino in the lead. Man was she hot! Yes, so many things could go wrong with leaving someone alone being the worst of all. Imagine her son doesn’t come home. The idiot who left to get whipped cream gets severely delayed and the house has a gas leak. The mom just goes to sleep and if alone long enough the gas ignites from the static electricity when the door is opened. Big Bada Boom! Personally I prefer Cool Whip.

I agree with the anonymous comment "This is just a rape story...". The female MC moved from a bad guy to a worse one. Play stupid games, win stupid prizes.

Five Stars love it. Waiting for chapter 2.

THE END?

Sounds like THE BEGINNING to me...

And those that cry rape... She wants it. If she'd said no, and he continued, I'd agree...